Azyriell

Chapter: 460

Although at the beginning of the story in this novel looks clichéd and out of place, the longer you read it you will feel that this story makes sense at some points, although there are also some flaws in this story that I think are quite fatal, the easiest example is the power system in this world makes no sense, not because of the division of power in each continent, but from the ranking of power, which only states that each continent has 1 ruler/faction to become the strongest, because in this story, there are no striking characters at all other than these "Overlords" which makes me wonder if the story is too fast or the author is just lazy to make a long plot, although I must admit this story has an interesting plot, But still, the shortcomings are in the "ability ranking" of each continent in this novel, which is quite lacking, besides that the characters are only centered on a few characters who are destined to become important figures in the future, which is quite predictable, as if every character living in the MC's world is a fool who doesn't even have the talent to defy heaven and earth "other than those who are destined". But there are also many good points in this novel that make it worth reading, ranging from character development, as well as the protagonist's opponents who have their own uniqueness.

*him

A "masterpiece" if you must describe it, although the impression of the story can be considered too fast because it only has 500 chapters in the story, but the author's skill in plotting makes up for it perfectly, I hope you can write consistently like this in your other novels like "Eternal Saṃsāra" for example, unlike your past self who made "THE CURSED GAMER" who didn't care about the heroine in the fanfic, Aqua in "Eternal Saṃsāra" is very disappointing in terms of romance, I hope you can make her (Aquamarine Hoshino) have good character development like he (Neji Hado).

Nah dude, that's me!