It's good, I loved it. Needs a little proofreading and some editing. Overall It's a perfect, cute and adoring story. Keep it up and good luck for the next story.
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SKYLER SMITH- I saw him enter my brother's cafe and I knew I love him. There he stood, the perfect gamer and my crush. He's a lot older than me, but I want him to know that I exist and I like him.
JAXON MILLER- We lost, my team, lost the nationals. I have one dream, just one. Winning the National Gaming Championship. This time we lost, not again. I don't need anything to distract me. I have to win.
What will happen when a 19-year-old Skyler Smith and a 28-year-old Jaxon Miller, two opposites crossroad?
It's good, I loved it. Needs a little proofreading and some editing. Overall It's a perfect, cute and adoring story. Keep it up and good luck for the next story.
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