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I read a lot of books.

2021-06-06 เข้าร่วมแล้ว United States
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blue_kirk
blue_kirk
1 months ago
Commented

you specialize in destroying their home and then taking them in.

Hearing this, Byakuya chuckled and said, "Shisui, you make a good point. I look forward to the day you succeed. But the reality of the ninja world is even harsher than you imagine. If you ever find yourself with no other options, feel free to come and join me. I specialize in taking in those without a home."

Mastermind of the Akatsuki

Mastermind of the Akatsuki

Anime & Comics · OberonLA

blue_kirk
blue_kirk
1 months ago
Replied to ShadowMonarch21

he is right at 13 hasirama was not this strong.

At this age and strength, not even the resurrected First Hokage could compare.

Mastermind of the Akatsuki

Mastermind of the Akatsuki

Anime & Comics · OberonLA

blue_kirk
blue_kirk
2 months ago
Posted

Sorry in advance if this is going to sound mean and like im attacking the author. Since reading up to chapter 57, the story has gone exactly nowhere with character development and world development. First off, the author has no conceptual idea what it means to be a demon in this universe. I understand the MC being different because he is a human inside a demon body, but no other demon acts like they are supposed to be. he is giving them emotions they are not genetically able to feel. he has the MC born 500 years before cannon just to transport him into the past 500 years to then later slingshot him 1000 years into the future. The MC has no personality or dreams of his own and needs people who can see the future to tell him what his dream is. He can not for the life of him decide something for himself. The MC has the personality of an annoying and lazy 5 year old. the author has this running joke about how he is too lazy to cook and that it is funny how he makes everyone else do stuff for him. The worst, tho is the creepy level he gives off whenever he sees a female. He's always talking about how they are petite and childlike. Then, while telling us about their ass or tit's, he says he is not into that kind of stuff. Sure, if it happened once, you could forget about it, but since chapter 57, my count is already at 6 times. Plus, each time, it gets worse, like he's competing to make everyone throw up. Even if none of this is a turn-off for you. the dialog is a mess it is really hard at some points to tell who is talking. The story has never progressed in any meaningful way. and all the plot points is just some guy telling the MC how to live his life because he can see the future. Ultimately, it is some trash you can read if you're dying of boardom. tho I truly would bo recommend that.

blue_kirk
blue_kirk
blue_kirk
8 months ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

blue_kirk
blue_kirk
8 months ago
Commented

the story is really nice. If I could give any advice it would be to sometimes see what his daughter is doing. Maybe throw it in as a bonus chapter evey once in a while.

blue_kirk
blue_kirk
9 months ago
Commented

thanks for the chapter. I really like the idea of this book.

blue_kirk
blue_kirk
9 months ago
Commented

is it just me, or can other people not access the new chapters.

blue_kirk
blue_kirk
9 months ago
Replied to YihyunCheonsu

most of my hours were accumulated over covid when I was in lockdown.

blue_kirk
blue_kirk
9 months ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle