Strong start!!
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The Gremlin wasted no time in slowly stabbing Rob to death.Rob was confused as to why he was going to die a slow death.What had he ever done to deserve this?
Games · admiralblast32
[Negative. The Universal Network System encourages user independence and rewards exploration]
Anime & Comics · Wicked132
10x in 1 chapter 😭 he sounds like killer B written by a confederate American. RUINS immersion.
The Black mechanic just seems like an excuse to repetitively say the n word
Thank you for the chapter author! Enjoying!
Thank you for the chapter!
I’m delighted by the detail
In the heart of this cold world stood an altar, like a monolith rising from the polished ground. It was alien in its design, haunting in its presence. Etched onto its surface were strange symbols, convoluted and intricate. The symbols shimmered, their edges lustrous under the glare of the harsh light, pulsating with an unspoken energy, the language of a world far removed from his understanding.
Fantasy · MadScythe
Quite unique
_"Inspiration: The ability to observe others' powers and techniques, then create a more powerful version."_
Universal Gaming:I recieved a SSS level talent
Games · gripphantom