Author I'm going to be completely honest with you. The reason I'm reading this story is due to the fact that there aren't many tower of god stories that are that good and yours is one of them that is good. However there are many areas of improvement. For one, there's the writing itself. Maybe it's due to other stories that I've read but this story has very little 'meat' so to speak. paragraphs are pretty short and the OC's thoughts are little 2 dimensional. However again that does not mean the story isn't bad by any means. it could just use some work. There are a couple of mispelling here and there but my brain automatically corrects it due to past history with other works. The interactions are a bit dry but that's to be expected from a 'assassin' or 'hitman'. you most likely made it that way to save yourself time in updating the story. some more backround on the character would be nice too as to help us understand the character more. I very much like the update speed and I do hope that you can continue this story to the best of your abilities. That is it for my review and I hope you have a wonderful day
I aint reading all that(No offense)
"You'll understand when I finish my story. where was I, right Avengers defeat. So after he was defeated he returned to the grail, however rather then returning to the throne of heroes he stayed in the grail, just like his legend. You see, unlike what the world believes Angra Mainyu was originally a simple farm boy. Unfortunately fate was cruel, he was chosen by his village as the 'source of all evil in the world'. That was the beginning of his hell, every day he was torture, abused, cursed and shund by all, they believed that by blaming him for all the evil in the world it would absolve them of all evil and purify them selves. So they tortured him his whole life doing all manner of cruelty to him and carving all manner of evils and curse into his flesh and defiling his mind. However they never allowed him to die, doing everything they could to keep him alive till he naturally died of old age, however that wasn't the end. As one final act of cruelty they cursed him forever after his death, one using the great evil he was to represent. So after his death rather then die he remained as a pseudo Divine spirit, stuck in the world and unable to interact with it, cursed to wonder for all his afterlife. However these same actions also qualified his as a heroic spirit, normally he could never be summoned though, however the Einzbern actions, circumvented the grails security system's and allowed him to be summoned. But not the pseudo Divine spirit that they expect, rather the poor tortured farm boy he was in life. After his defeat he kept in line with his legend and remained in the grail, corrupting it, defiling it, turning it into a mockery of what it was. Now to answer your question about Justeaze, she sacrificed herself as the core of the greater grail, in order to allow someone to truly obtain the third magic. You see Justeaze was the Einzbern's ultimate creating capable of wielding the third magic however it wasn't perfect. Unlike you who has completely obtained your magic, you can freely unleash it's miracle at will, as most if it is powered directly by the root, an example it me. You took my soul from the grail and created a body. For any magus no matter how good, even if they new exactly what and how to do it and had all material recourses ready, they still couldn't because of the lack of mana, even the grail doesn't have enough mana to power such a miracle, unless the person in question was using the third magic even if only a fragment"
Fate/illusionary speed
Anime & Comics · OmegaDragon
That depends on what these stats are comparing him too. If it's the average human(in which they do exist) you could say he is as strong as maybe a practitioner of martial arts. in the end its up to you to determine how strong 'strong' is. mind you there are monsters in the lookism verse such as Charles Choi or gun or goo
Now a question: Is Jinsoo too overpowered and should I nerf him?
Lookism: To The Top
Anime & Comics · D_Legexd