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Mystrixxa1_Trish
female LV 1Usually solitary, so to escape into my silence I write. I write with a mission, I play with words, I print my imagination to each page as mystery unfolds into words.
2021-05-29 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Trinidad & Tobagoกิจกรรม
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ป้าย 5
Moments 5
Mystrixxa1_Trish
Unusual but interesting I like it
Mystrixxa1_Trish
somehow chapter 2 seems like another story. maybe it should be introduced in the preceding chapters . Chapter three seemed like the actual continuation of chapter 1. but I am following this story, it's nice.👍
Mystrixxa1_Trish
needs edit in last line
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The Isle of Guardians
Fantasy · d_nmalory
Mystrixxa1_Trish
some editing will benefit. I think it's good otherwise. I like it.👍
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original ATOHMMA
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The natives were elemental. They were known for their superpowers and special abilities. Everything revolved around Atohmma being the descendant of the ancestral native elf people and becoming the true leader. She was petite, powerful, wise and envied. Her world was strange, cold and foggy. Many years passed before she realized, that even her fleeting thoughts, had the power to affect, destroy or improve her world. Copyright: Tricia A. Brown (Mystrixxa) @ WEBNOVEL AUTHOR: Mystrixxa51 Chs 4 คอลเลกชัน
ok well I guess the transition or maybe the flow is missing something. A reader should be able to tell.
The Isle of Guardians
Fantasy · d_nmalory