This been great novel I read this from start to here. My only gripe is that dragons are angry I find it funny and odd. This little gripe the power system little complicated.
Well I put in three sets and call them rank I going put two things one for best other for human 1. common or rookie 2. Uncommon or worker 3. Rare or knight 4. Very rare or Noble 5. Legend or king or queen ------------------------------------------- 6. Artifact or Conqueror 7. Old or Lord 8. Disaster or Unhuman 9. Toxic or Best 10. Unreal or Heavenly -------------------------------------- 11. EarthBound or Angel 12. immortal or Ark Angel 13. Unbound or Seraph 14. Pure Blood or Holy Angel 15. Eclipsed or Divine I'm not great at naming as well but human side doesn't seem bad the monster side I'm not too sure.
I don't know what's best to help but a idea you join the year writing contest. Your writing few unique ones I know of. As a author my self tho I mostly like reading I write for fun. Thx for a chapter and don't let reality hold you down.
Not my best work very hard read lol
Hello I'm the author of this book. My work not the greatest but I try. Now if you like realistic fantasy and characters. This the novel and it's has no System.
It's Jealously at its finest because at the end the day we wish have something that we don't
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Hero of Darkness
Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
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original Lightvex
Jackson Erik is a TCG player with everyday life things can't get any better because he is in the top 10 in the world cup. Even if he does not get first place just being here is all can ask for. But turns out this cup was way getting the 10 with the most potential to be beta testers' new game Lightvex same name card game we have been playing. And with new tech called dive that simulates a new world and your full consciousness is there. And is a one-way trip and there is a virus name X that wants nothing but to end all life. How can Jackson stop the virus following this journey to find out?11 Chs 1 คอลเลกชัน
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Last Chance
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Follow David Reed as he tries to survive an apocalyptic world. But he's been an attack by one of the mutations. As thinking of old times as waits for his death. He passes out and the new day showed itself pain like none before fall on him. Well, he passes on in the afterlife, or will he get one last chance to find the truth.24 Chs 1 คอลเลกชัน
When you get to this point of the novel. You how much the author bias bleeds into the writing. Like some the main character actions so out of place. When you add her own believes into a writing. It's gets less interesting and turn way some readers.
Ace Dragon Rider
Eastern · Gao Sen