H0racio

H0racio

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2021-04-28 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Brazil
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H0racio
H0racio
3 years ago
Posted

Very good writing and easy to read, the world is well constructed and a first person romance something I rarely see. I recommend you read this history.

H0racio
H0racio
3 years ago
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Mythologies: A Devil Prince's Revenge

Mythologies: A Devil Prince's Revenge

Fantasy · SabergKeys

H0racio
H0racio
3 years ago
Posted

I liked this story, the writing is good and easy to read. The concept of vampires and boy bands is something I have never seen before, the story has a very interesting plot. If you like vampire stories, I recommend that you read it.

H0racio
H0racio
3 years ago
Replied to Tzucaza

You are right, my mistake... thank you

H0racio
H0racio
3 years ago
Replied to Alancaster

Thank you very much, I will be working hard to improve!

H0racio
H0racio
3 years ago
Replied to Alancaster

I already have some of the next chapters ready, and as the story goes on, everything will be explained.

"Of course they are, some zombies can only be killed by hitting them right on the head, and with magic it is very difficult to aim and hit them", some of the children whispered to each other.

Apocalypse in the World of Magic

Apocalypse in the World of Magic

Fantasy · H0racio

H0racio
H0racio
3 years ago
Posted

The quality of the writing is very good, the author describes the scenarios very well. There was always a bit of mystery here and there that made me want to read more to see what would happen next. The only thing that bothered me a little was the length of the paragraphs, but it depends from person to person, otherwise it was really good to me.

H0racio
H0racio
3 years ago
Commented

Oh my God, the priest has really disappeared! I have been waiting for this.

A car honked behind Mwene who swiftly jumped out of the way. He looked back and watched it drive by but when he looked for the priest he simply vanished. Confused, Mwene headed back to his motorcycle and drove back to the village whilst trying not to think of what the man said. He arrived at a busy wooden tavern with people standing outside drinking and smoking and being jolly. He parked his motorcycle and took off his helmet and was greeted by a familiar face. "What's up?" said the pretty face with pink eyes and grey hair. "I know, I know I'm late.'' Mwene said apologetically as he one arm hugged Nike, his oldest friend.

Escape From Paradise

Escape From Paradise

Sci-fi · Ozymandias007i

H0racio
H0racio
3 years ago
Commented

What a twist, I never imagined I would see two transmigrated people meeting

H0racio
H0racio
3 years ago
Posted

This story is great, the way things are explained, the appearance of another transmigrant, the desire for freedom of the protagonist all this makes me want to read more and more, the dialogue flows naturally and the writing is excellent, I CONCERNEDLY WILL CONTINUE TO READ THIS.

  • Reborn as a Goddess with a World Creation System original

    Reborn as a Goddess with a World Creation System

    Fantasy REINCARNATION SYSTEM MAGIC DETAILED

    After a short and abrupt life, a young girl awakens in a mysterious place and discovers that she has been reincarnated as a goddess with a special system for creating entire worlds. Tired of the boredom of her previous life, she decides to create a new world and mold it in her image and likeness. With her divine abilities, she breathes life into beings and magic, hoping to see them grow and prosper. With careful and attentive vision, the goddess watches as her world develops, enchanted with each new discovery and triumph of her inhabitants. Sometimes she descends from the sky to interact with her followers, guiding them in times of need and inspiring them to new heights. However, with great power comes great responsibility, and the goddess soon realizes that not everything is perfect in her new world. Conflicts arise among her inhabitants, and she must deal with the consequences of her own choices. With her own challenges and dangers, the goddess struggles to protect her world and its creatures, preventing them from being destroyed by external or internal forces. But with the help of her allies and her own divine wisdom, she is determined to create a world where everyone can thrive and prosper.

    25 Chs 67 คอลเลกชัน

  • Apocalypse in the World of Magic original

    Apocalypse in the World of Magic

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE REINCARNATION SYSTEM MAGIC APOCALYPSE

    4.94

    A young girl, a college student, works day in and day out to pay for her studies, but she dies from working so hard. Then she finds herself in a new world in the body of a 12-year-old girl named Lilian. "What? I'm in another world ... and on top of that there's a world overrun by a zombie apocalypse ... and there's magic ... how can it get any better than this?". Join Lilian on this incredible adventure into a whole new world, where she will explore every part of it and possibly find a way to save it? Hello, this is my first novel, so any constructive criticism is very welcome to help me improve. This is the English version of the novel, there is one in Portuguese. Support me: ko-fi.com/horaciogui The image in the novel is not mine, if you are the owner and want me to remove it let me know.

    16 Chs 171 คอลเลกชัน

  • Apocalipse No Mundo De Magia original

    Apocalipse No Mundo De Magia

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE REINCARNATION SYSTEM MAGIC APOCALYPSE

    Essa é minha primeira novel, não sou muito bom nisso então aceito qualquer crítica construtiva que me ajude a evoluir. This is my first novel, I'm not very good at it, so I'll take any constructive criticism that helps me evolve The image is not original of mine, I found it but I didn't find the author, if you are the author and want me to retire, let me know.

    15 Chs 117 คอลเลกชัน