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Fantasy · SabergKeys
I liked this story, the writing is good and easy to read. The concept of vampires and boy bands is something I have never seen before, the story has a very interesting plot. If you like vampire stories, I recommend that you read it.
You are right, my mistake... thank you
Thank you very much, I will be working hard to improve!
I already have some of the next chapters ready, and as the story goes on, everything will be explained.
"Of course they are, some zombies can only be killed by hitting them right on the head, and with magic it is very difficult to aim and hit them", some of the children whispered to each other.
Fantasy · H0racio
The quality of the writing is very good, the author describes the scenarios very well. There was always a bit of mystery here and there that made me want to read more to see what would happen next. The only thing that bothered me a little was the length of the paragraphs, but it depends from person to person, otherwise it was really good to me.
Oh my God, the priest has really disappeared! I have been waiting for this.
A car honked behind Mwene who swiftly jumped out of the way. He looked back and watched it drive by but when he looked for the priest he simply vanished. Confused, Mwene headed back to his motorcycle and drove back to the village whilst trying not to think of what the man said. He arrived at a busy wooden tavern with people standing outside drinking and smoking and being jolly. He parked his motorcycle and took off his helmet and was greeted by a familiar face. "What's up?" said the pretty face with pink eyes and grey hair. "I know, I know I'm late.'' Mwene said apologetically as he one arm hugged Nike, his oldest friend.
Sci-fi · Ozymandias007i
What a twist, I never imagined I would see two transmigrated people meeting
"Yes-you! Who are you?!"
Fantasy · Alancaster
This story is great, the way things are explained, the appearance of another transmigrant, the desire for freedom of the protagonist all this makes me want to read more and more, the dialogue flows naturally and the writing is excellent, I CONCERNEDLY WILL CONTINUE TO READ THIS.
Very good writing and easy to read, the world is well constructed and a first person romance something I rarely see. I recommend you read this history.
Mythologies: A Devil Prince's Revenge
Fantasy · SabergKeys