DaoistbLWXLJ

female LV 14

I like inteligent MC

2021-04-03 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Czechia
ป้าย 12

Moments 27
DaoistbLWXLJ
DaoistbLWXLJ
1 years ago
Commented

why the MC did not report that the archer was kidnapped by his own master?

DaoistbLWXLJ
DaoistbLWXLJ
1 years ago
Commented

why not trade secrets for why they are killing them and how they detect it?

DaoistbLWXLJ
DaoistbLWXLJ
1 years ago
Posted

It was a pleasure to read the 40 chapters of this novel. I really like the approach of the mc. He not only trains but also learns theory and even thinks outside of the box how to train better. No stupid cliches.

DaoistbLWXLJ
DaoistbLWXLJ
1 years ago
Commented

why not pretend to be part of the guild and also hse it as a way to tell Mars who are the enemies

DaoistbLWXLJ
DaoistbLWXLJ
1 years ago
Commented

Also why not capture her without seeing/being seen and than get all her fans - she can be killled afterwards

DaoistbLWXLJ
DaoistbLWXLJ
DaoistbLWXLJ
1 years ago
Posted

Very nice work, with good descriptions nice and unexpected MC cheat. A bit of Marty Stu but not too much. I am looking forward to read past chapter 40.

DaoistbLWXLJ
DaoistbLWXLJ
1 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

DaoistbLWXLJ
DaoistbLWXLJ
DaoistbLWXLJ
1 years ago
Posted

nice book with decent story, to some degree similar with others, but well written and with interesting world building. I especially appreciate that the MC is not stupid,relying on plotarmor or needing to mention his inteligence every other paragraph. I am looking forward for more chapters