saturrn

First, thank you for having read both fanfics, and for finding positives in Beyond Blue. Honestly, thank you for showing your appreciation and I’d like to give you fully fleshed out response. For me, the writer’s block comes from the abysmal ending of the manga, and trying to envision a "proper" ending without completely derailing from the story. I have the same issue every time I try to write a fanfic for Major, the baseball anime. The ending frustrates me to the point of…not even being able to properly describe what I am feeling. I do acknowledge the part about the protagonist being a fully experienced player. Over the course of writing this Persona fanfic, I've come to better understanding of my writing style specifically how I characterize my protagonist. By nature, I am rarely if ever impulsive, reckless, are all that passionate. I’m often described as calm, meticulous, and calculated. I believe that my own personality bleeds too deeply into my protagonist, and it becomes a form of mental gymnastics to characterize a fictional character while psychoanalyzing myself…If that makes any sense. A separation needs to be made between how I as the author view the world, and how the character views the world. That being said, I would love to hear any new ideas you may have. Again, thank you for you taking time out of your day to read these fanfics, and even leave a comment. It means the world to me. Sorry for rambling.

Thank you for the support

I understand your point, and as someone who dabbles in writing their own fan-fic I get it. It's always your interpretation, and that is perfectly fine. Obviously, we're not going to get into the laws of physics that dominate the TOG and if they are the same or slightly different than the ones in the Narutoverse. I can understand the idea of intergration as well. A different soul should not be able to seamlessly use a new body without some practice, but you already said that he's integrated his skills. Sasuke is really fast, at the minimum, relatively light speed. Because he can fight a guy who casually dodges a light speed attack (Sage Art Light Fang). No one should able to touch Sasuke unless they are lightspeed level. That is unless you believe that TOG High Rankers are light-speed level, which is a debatable, except maybe Urek, who has hax. Again, great work so far. I'm not here to slander or really argue, I just couldn't understand a few aspects of the story so far. Thank you for your hard work.