Fly_Away_8966

1 months ago

Commented

seems kinda cold.... and dark lol

ch 23 Swallowed

Genius Noble With System

Fantasy · sleepingpeacefully

Fly_Away_8966

1 months ago

Commented

Only a small critique; in order for the story to seem more contiguous, keeping tense would be preferable.

ch 21 World shaking Phenomenon

Genius Noble With System

Fantasy · sleepingpeacefully

Fly_Away_8966

1 months ago

Commented

next!

Although the meeting was nerve-racking, something good also happened, as he was able to make contact with life energy for the first time.

Genius Noble With System

Fantasy · sleepingpeacefully

Fly_Away_8966

1 months ago

Commented

more please

ch 71 Demon's Heart

I’m a Immortal Tavernkeeper, But My S-Rank Daughter Doesn’t Know That!

Fantasy · NandoFalske

Fly_Away_8966

3 years ago

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

ch 0 1 Starting Over

Reincarnation of the Strongest Sword God

Games · Lucky Old Cat

Fly_Away_8966

3 years ago

Commented

why is gentle snow even there if she knows who the founder is

ch 542 Manager

Reincarnation of the Strongest Sword God

Games · Lucky Old Cat

Fly_Away_8966

3 years ago

Commented

the chapters are getting shorter, noticeably so...

ch 497 Initial Mastery

Reincarnation of the Strongest Sword God

Games · Lucky Old Cat

Fly_Away_8966

3 years ago

Commented

still too op, where is the real hardship

ch 204 Battle Prowess of a Tier 1

Reincarnation of the Strongest Sword God

Games · Lucky Old Cat

Fly_Away_8966

3 years ago

Commented

money sink book, tales forever, repeats stats over and over for word fill

ch 204 Battle Prowess of a Tier 1

Reincarnation of the Strongest Sword God

Games · Lucky Old Cat

Fly_Away_8966

3 years ago

Commented

wondering when his level will be found out by the public or when the God system will try to correct him (the oddity)

ch 202 Scorching Lamia

Reincarnation of the Strongest Sword God

Games · Lucky Old Cat