Will the protagonist at some point in the story calm down with his hatred towards non-humans?
The protagonist is too racist towards the non-human
"What I ended weren't human. Not anymore."
Anime & Comics · Huntsman
If the spear is the pillar of reality, it cannot simply destroy reality. Where does alaya live?
And what did you guys think of the scanning of Rhongomyniad? It took me a while to imagine how it should look, and I think it turned out alright.
Anime & Comics · Leylin_Blackwood
In the end, the protagonist will manage to escape from the contract with alaya or not.
You could give it an authority that instead of eliminating something from existence, causes it to never exist with the domains of creation, nullification and nothingness.
Extra Note: I would like to hear your ideas for what Authorities to give him and what Domains it should be based on. Unless you think he will be way too stacked and has enough Authorities for now.
Anime & Comics · King_Rycon
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4. Ouroboros Dragon, Ophis
Anime & Comics · King_Rycon
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that story was abandoned or restarted
After all, every devil fruit is a possibility for human evolution that someone desires. At least according to Vegapunk.
Harry's Multiversal Journey
Book&Literature · SenseiCaffeine