this has already become stupid, jow can the mc not discover the spy when he used his ss rank skills that's impossible, the syrory has just downgraded from a 3.5 star tor a 2 star because it shows that the author needs forced plot to make a good story
I read to chapter 82. in my opinion I would have really enjoyed reading this novel if it's basic framework would have been built better, it had been a lot more polished and they substituted the system for an actually powerful growth type talent. one of the biggest of of the novel is the system, its too broken spoilers but it makes Training his army completely irrelevant instead they all basically use an experience system because of that they got strong too fast but for some reason always struggle when fighting weaker enemies because they is a limit to how much a mob enemy can be strengthen before you trash the novel for making no sense so instead they give stupid reasons why the mc army is losing for convenience to actually have a fight scenes instead of a slaughter. the finally reason the novel isn't as good I wanted it to be is because of the mc, you would want to like him but it's hard, he is very stupid. I believe if the author removed the system and gave the mc a talent that can do what the system can do but as an actual talent and make it alot more natural making the training time in months and years, make the mc system support and help the designated people training faster and assist it breakthrough, give support while training combat techniques and ideas of new evolution methods for their pet beast but needing to get the materials themselves it would have been a whole lot better
your excuse makes no sense, if she were a gold rank I would understand but she is a diamond rank. what it feels like to me is that since his people get stronger without actually working for it the rank isn't even important there are just names without any weight or combat power
Asher mercilessly slaughtered the bandits until he found Eritrea fighting in the midst of bandits. She was still able to stand her ground, and bodies were piling up around her. Her arrows could be seen embedded into the bodies of the corpses, and though she breathed heavily, her eyes were as sharp as an eagle's own.
Games · DD_TheDreamer
author if your excuse was that the archer was an agility based warrior thats why she was having a hard time against bronze and silver warriors explain why his diamond rank knight with diamond rank weopen and sacred rank sword is even getting injured in the fight it makes no sense it feels forced like you wanted to write some cool fight scenes of the mc but it's coming off mediocre
Asher looked at the sharp triangular spearhead right before his eyes. It came out from the body of his personal bodyguard, Alex!
Games · DD_TheDreamer
his talent has zero growth potential
He didn't understand what happened, but in that state, he felt he could kill 100 silver-ranked and come out unhurt, but exhaustion and depleted stamina would be his death.
Games · DD_TheDreamer
why I am sure this is the same guy that had your iron Ore and was planning with mercenaries to take over your land or I am mistaken
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Games · DD_TheDreamer
why didn't he use Gluttony on th rest of the wolves
the fact that a single mage made a fool out of 2 of the mc's most elite fighter is incredibly disappointing, I would be ashamed if I was him. the fact that an angel, the right hand of god couldn't recognise a fake from the real thing when they all have a connection to him has to be the most stupid plot I have ever seen. she should be killed off and scraped as a character entirely for someone better
you should have just killed michaela off, she has been useless so far in the novel, the only time she has been useful was holding back Satan. I would have expected more from someone they called the right hand of god
I hate this gimmick
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War · MiuNovels