i have an outline 😊
"I cannot explain to you now about those things as you are too weak. You just need to know that the Veilstrider family has a strong bloodline in their blood.
Fantasy · Forgetful_Sage
nah, nah, nah...my friend, you are stepping into the unknown if I really did that, readers would bury me into spit. I can't touch that....at least not here 😘
"What a load of crap!" Ian expressed his disdain as there was nobody who liked being manipulated by another; even if it was destiny.
Fantasy · Forgetful_Sage
nope, no such things
My man hates the same things I do. Hehe, thanks for the review, by the way. I will try not to mess this up and make it as enjoyable a ride as possible. 🙏
Thank you for your such lengthy comment. I am happy that you took your time to give suggestions which I will try to include in my future plot as appropriate. Until then, Happy Reading ✌️
nope
removed... don't worry.
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Fantasy · Forgetful_Sage
Yep, absolutely. I planned character development for all of em but since I'm new to this, please bear with me if I made some mistakes ☺️
'If I am going to be a scumbag, I will be a scumbag to the end.'
Fantasy · Forgetful_Sage
You will know why at later chaps ..
After returning home from the restaurant, Ian tried to contact his father but to no avail. As one of the Dukes of the empire and head of the Veilstrider family, Eldric was quite busy. So, Ian had to wait for the banquet.
Fantasy · Forgetful_Sage
lol, then what was he supposed to do? Pull his hair off guessing things?
He was sick of the random thoughts. Everything would become clear once he grew strong enough.
Passerby Villain In A Wizard World
Fantasy · Forgetful_Sage