David_Sooman

David_Sooman

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New writer, got bored

2021-02-23 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Global
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David_Sooman
David_Sooman
2 days ago
Posted

Started off string and was interesting for the most part. I had to drop if after a few chapters for 2 reasons 1. Massive 6 year time skip from age 6-12. At age 6 he was gaining 500 exp per slime kill and was lv 26. 6 whole years later he is only lv24 and he shows he was 10,000/14,000 from the next level. That’s 8 slimes. He is said “to have made a name for himself” and “completing a lot of missions” no he isn’t he is killing less than one alike a week. This is just so dumb I can’t 2. His brother Mike hating him so much is so horrible written and portraited. If you are going to have a revenge or betrayal ark from family at least make it readable. It’s so cringe and the fact no one does anything is so dumb. Overall if these 2 were fixed it would be a solid read. The absurd and terrible leveling though just makes the reader suspend belief more than a terrible MTL cultivation novel

David_Sooman
David_Sooman
8 days ago
Posted

This is just a direct rip off of the Fanfic “Three to Backstep” by Sinyk on Fanfiction.net It’s complete on Fanfiction.net and no where does this guy say he is legitamently posting Sinyks work on here

David_Sooman
David_Sooman
8 days ago
Replied to abner_Britto

Search “Three to backstep” by Sinyk. It’s complete on FanFiction.net don’t support people plagiarizing works on here

David_Sooman
David_Sooman
8 days ago
Replied to Lordgrey

“Three to Backstep” on FanFiction.Net by Sinyk. This is a direct copy and paste of that fanfic and it’s complete on fanction.net

David_Sooman
David_Sooman
2 months ago
Posted

Great start to an alternate timeline of old Valayria. Love seeing new characters and settings to your typical fic. Finished chapter 30 and I am hoping you start going into politics more and have our MC bri g more new tech!

David_Sooman
David_Sooman
1 years ago
Commented

Would love a Tywin pov on how mad he is no longer the richest house. Maybe a Cersei one also. Keep up the good work!

David_Sooman
David_Sooman
2 years ago
Replied to RECLUSE

It was Torrhen ur right

It also helps I studied mechanical engineering at school and I'm starting my masters next year. I wouldn't say I'm the smartest guy there is but I know my way around physics and chemistry better than most and could hopefully pull some of that technology out of my ass in a pinch. Not that I would ever want to be thrown into a medieval world full of politics, wars, death, and fucking ice zombies all while everyone wants to sit on a throne of damn swords.

Reincarnated into Game of Thrones as Brandon Stark. A SI

Reincarnated into Game of Thrones as Brandon Stark. A SI

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David_Sooman
David_Sooman
2 years ago
Replied to ZE0

They got the new ship yard though they did not get a ton, it will be addressed In a later chapter

David_Sooman
David_Sooman
2 years ago
Replied to Tyler_Henline_7485

It is a massive chair of melted swords that Aegon acquired from the conquest, mostly from when Cregen Stark knelt and surrendered. In the show its just a big chair but in the books and lore it is massive, maybe 20+ ft not 100% sure

It also helps I studied mechanical engineering at school and I'm starting my masters next year. I wouldn't say I'm the smartest guy there is but I know my way around physics and chemistry better than most and could hopefully pull some of that technology out of my ass in a pinch. Not that I would ever want to be thrown into a medieval world full of politics, wars, death, and fucking ice zombies all while everyone wants to sit on a throne of damn swords.

Reincarnated into Game of Thrones as Brandon Stark. A SI

Reincarnated into Game of Thrones as Brandon Stark. A SI

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David_Sooman
David_Sooman
2 years ago
Replied to Anthony_Burke

Very true, but I wanted a pantheon people recognize. That way I don’t have to waste words on explanations

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    Reincarnated into Game of Thrones as Brandon Stark. A SI

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