VioletIMthWy

I saw a lot of "I became the mother of a villain" or "I became the son of an earl", etc. But for gg to be in the father's body in the novel, this is new. I've read two chapters, so far it's interesting, I don't know what will happen in the future. I'll be waiting! I don't know anything about grammar, since I myself read using a translator, but I liked how the author describes things. And the writing style itself, though strange, is fine, it is quite readable to the eyes. The setting is also interesting, as is the system itself

I must say right away that you intrigued me with the plot. The beginning is intriguing. It is interesting to find out what will happen in the future with the main character. And this is the first time I've seen someone become a father, all I've read is about mothers, daughters and sons. But I've never heard of my father. I also hope that the main character will surprise us with something else, especially the character. In any case, the plot is 5, and the grammar, I don't know, is fine. It's easy to read for me.

The story has potential. Ok, some parts of this work do not have values but it is not that much. Writing quality, I suppose it is good. Updates are good. It will be perfect if you improve story development and MC design like sometimes he is not understandable, so plz improve it. World background I think is also good. 1mth

Nice book. OP MC. Again review, I like it. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍