Ammie_Kinyon

Raenen-- just wondering if the rest of the story is "simmering in the back burner" in your mind ... and will eventually flow from your creator's pen?...Or will this goldmine be abandoned? You put so much creativity and sass into it, it kept me obsessed and hanging on for 3 years, hoping for this ONE story to be completed! You started updating again a few months ago, and I was on cloud 9! But then dropped again 3 months ago... and at such a critical point, when Wynter made all those calls, just bursting to tell people that Keith proposed! And we're left haunted by the first call she made without realizing who she actually called... With all the amazing sass,quality, and potential you've created in this story, it's starting to feel like a genius child abandoned and left behind. What is even the MOST AMAZING STORY without some kind of closure... conclusion... or ending? And Elle's unfinished mystery still haunts me.... Was she the Nagasaki's assassin getting full immunity from Katrina? Is she really, truly dead? It's strange how so many stories can be read, and then forgotten. But then ONE PARTICULAR STORY can hit you so deep, so profoundly, you can't forget it even if you wanted to! Especially when it mirrors so much of your own life experience! What happened to Katerina when she was kidnapped . . . and how THAT CHANGED HER COMPLETELY, after watching Seven be tortured and killed in front of her. Then, Elle disappearing again, then being killed (a member of my family disappeared, and now pressumed dead by police). It's such a discouraging, defeated feeling . . . no hope for anything good to come from it. But in a fiction story, the ending can be made good... or at least the mystery solved in a way that makes sense... and can somehow make real life a little easier to deal with. So, some stories are not JUST stories . . . and are NEVER meant to ever be forgotten . . .

Such a beautiful, agonizing depth of character... subtly hopeful that Dario might grow feelings for her, like she has for him... but profoundly lonesome, feeling she is not good enough or worthy to be his duchess... in contrast to the birthday celebration around her... and a nearly identical reflection of Dario's loneliness and yearning for her! So hauntingly written, the reader can't help but feel those very emotions swelling and surging in one's own heart!