Aster_Pheonix

Aster_Pheonix

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Aster_Pheonix
Aster_Pheonix
1 years ago
Replied to Darksiidde

Thanks you very much for the support. 😊🙏❤

Aster_Pheonix
Aster_Pheonix
1 years ago
Commented

Sorry, it was typing error, I actually gave it someone to type it for me cos of some reason. I also just had time to cross check the work. pls no such mistake will happen in the future

Aster_Pheonix
Aster_Pheonix
1 years ago
Replied to Maedreas

1 FL

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Aster_Pheonix
1 years ago
Posted

In my honest review the story plot isn't special. However, I could feel the author care and enthusiasm while writing this book. Every line, words, grammar, paragraphs and chapters were handled in a fragile manner to avoid cracks which made this novel worthwhile and valuable. In my opinion this book has potential to be one of the best of its time.

Aster_Pheonix
Aster_Pheonix
1 years ago
Posted

I loved the Sypnosis although the book has only two chapters which I enjoyed. I hope the author maintains this concept cause there is potential in it

Aster_Pheonix
Aster_Pheonix
1 years ago
Posted

seriously, It felt like I was reading a sequel to teen wolf movie. This book had me hooked and I [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Aster_Pheonix
Aster_Pheonix
1 years ago
Posted

First of all the sypnosis was great and the book itself was noting less of what was expected. Good job to the author

Aster_Pheonix
Aster_Pheonix
1 years ago
Posted

There are little grammatical errors but it doesn't disrupt the flow of the story. This is a book with potential

Aster_Pheonix
Aster_Pheonix
1 years ago
Replied to Rainandstorm

You can also check out my other novel The Replicator: My SS-RANK is Ergokinesis

Aster_Pheonix
Aster_Pheonix
1 years ago
Posted

There were minor grammatical errors in some chapters pls work on that,nonetheless it didn't ruin the flow of the story. It felt like reading a thriller novel which are difficult to write most times but the author did his best to make this book worth while.

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  • The Replicator: My Special Ability is Ergokinesis original

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