thiesm92

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2021-01-26 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Global
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thiesm92
1 years ago
Commented

I honestly did not mind the "info-dump" it fleshes out the universe a lot more and I found it very interestingly written. I especially liked the fact that the monsters in the domes turned from faceless xp farms to something with more background and personality to it. So you should keep throwing these in from time to time.

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thiesm92
2 years ago
Posted

I love the worldbuilding this guy does! MC has a overpowered ability but still has to put in the work. There are some really interesting Characters and well written relationships between the characters. But seriously I just want to keep reading to find out more about the world, the abilities, the characters once you start you cant stop!

thiesm92
thiesm92
2 years ago
Commented

I think it starts out a little slow. Since we are not learning about things as the character (Seth already knows) does. Coupled with the fact that our friend is not the most pleasent idividual. These might be reasons why. I actually loved being Introduced to the MC on a toilet as a person with evolved sense of smell - amazing! I did grow to like Seth more as we found out about him too so I can t wait to see where the story takes him. Just like with the woodcutter you do an exeptional job at worldbuilding and a great MC far from the shiny, boringly overpowered characters that other people write.

thiesm92
thiesm92
2 years ago
Commented

Congrats to the the contract!! I cant wait to read more.

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thiesm92
2 years ago
Commented

Thanks for the bonus chapter and the explanation! 👍

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thiesm92
2 years ago
Commented

I hope that we find out more about the Kühl’s past. Its becoming a more and more intriguing character!

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thiesm92
2 years ago
Commented

I love Krugans development in this! Though he likely wont be a second Jack it shows how much power Aitos words (and a good beating) can have.

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thiesm92
2 years ago
Commented

Vacation is over I see. Can’t wait for the next chapters! ROTW is back Baby!!

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thiesm92
3 years ago
Commented

Hey Author backstory has been great to understand her motivation and give the situation more weight. This story is so awesome, I really hope you find your jam back. Love your work dude!!