Temnizziv

I don't usually write reviews but i had to write on this one. When I started reading this novel at the beginning, I didnt like it. Why? Because of pacing it was really fast jumping throught everything really quick but somehow at around chapter 30 I kinda started to "get it" and enjoyed it very much and the comedy was really good and it compensated fast pace for this novel. The updates were really good too ! I think i kinda got tired of reading fanfics and mtl, because most of them get dropped midway or updates are really slow or just bunch of info dump, but not in this novel. Thanks for this story really enjoyed it. Good luck. No regrets.

Story is meh so far. Just Goku is now acting like a chinese stepping stone for a protagonist like "I didnt see mount tai" "sorry sir I will prepare right away", acting all subserviant and conversation doesnt feel genuine at all, will see how the future story progresses. good luck

Chapter is way too short, half of it is how goku looks and super short description and other half very short summary of DB events. I dont mind if chapter are like this but i would expect atleast 5 or more chapters a day then, If he will have stats window then do not count it towards word count because if it stays like this then half of chapter is stat window description and other half is a few sentences of story

Still if Raizel is lvl100 he should have alot better equipment than world enemy lets say who is capped at 130lvl(random lvl) so with various equipments with are obtained through hard work + pay2win walls lets say Raizel can fight someone at lvl120 who has tier lower equipment + we can add Raizel has alot more of combat experience, strategies and all that, he probably could fight above lvl130(just an example) in 1v1 duel + if he adds few of his NPCs into a fight it will be an easy win. Anyway i just hope that World enemy wont become a cockroach who is very hard to kill/subdue or if he takes out items out of nowhere with are better that of Raizels without reasonable explation.

Raizel should be way ahead of this "reincarnated person"(I will call that unknown person like that) in terms of world items/gear/NPC's /stats and all that stuff because raizel was grinding like crazy since the beginning, it was said that "reincarnated person" only logged in cant remember clearly every week for few hours? to grind SAME dungeon I think. This will be a total bul*sh*t if somehow "reincarnated person" is in the same or above league as Raizel. Unless it also got his wishes from a god or help from game developers or other unknown reasons.