_Louellia_

_Louellia_

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2021-01-11 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Ascension Island
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_Louellia_
_Louellia_
2 years ago
Posted

Hi dear readers, author here! Things to expect in the story: - More on kingdom building and adventure. - Of course, magic. - Romance will be a slow burn. - Op and smart mc since she lived three times already. And I'm never a fan of nerfing my mc, will depend hahaha. Anyway if you are a fan of such plots, then you are welcome to read the Reincarnation of the Archmage. Happy Reading to all!

_Louellia_
_Louellia_
2 years ago
Commented

Is Lilian under the illusion of the dragon or something? Her and 50's bg story were sad, I hope she will have her own happiness.

_Louellia_
_Louellia_
2 years ago
Posted

This story can be a hidden gem with lots of polishing, it can shine in the future.. Writing quality: There are some grammatical errors but didn't hinder much to your reading. Though I feel some dialogues a bit wordy, clunky and unnatural like if a person talks to a normal conversation, it usually brief or direct to the point without much dramatic words unless they are preaching, teaching or having public orientation. Story Development. The story is still starting but a lot of potential development is already brewing. Character Design. Estelle, the female lead seems to be a likeable character already. I just hope she didn't end up being a Mary Sue. Updating Stability. Nothing much to say here yet since the story is still starting. World Background. A lot to see and anticipate. She rebirth back to 2010 and set in similar earth, so maybe we can see a lot of common things back on these years. Recommendation? If you're into rebirth stories, you can give this a try, it might suit your preferences like me. Good luck author, added this to my library.

_Louellia_
_Louellia_
2 years ago
Commented

This is exciting. I wonder what will her club perform on this.

"Club Introduction Performance: July 16, 2010." She muttered to herself.

Rebirth Odyssey: Back at High School

Rebirth Odyssey: Back at High School

Fantasy · Ysabeeel

_Louellia_
_Louellia_
2 years ago
Commented

Oh, quite the cliffhanger. I look forward for more updates authorr .

_Louellia_
_Louellia_
_Louellia_
2 years ago
Commented

Nice chapter 👌👌👌

_Louellia_
_Louellia_
2 years ago
Commented

My ghad, Angel of Miracles, so cringe hahaha.

'Together the four of them were called the Angel of Miracles due to their outstanding talents.'

Rebirth Odyssey: Back at High School

Rebirth Odyssey: Back at High School

Fantasy · Ysabeeel

_Louellia_
_Louellia_
2 years ago
Commented

If I'm right, they are talking about going to Bohol right? Why is it Antique all of the sudden here?

"Then have you already booked a flight to Antique?!"

Rebirth Odyssey: Back at High School

Rebirth Odyssey: Back at High School

Fantasy · Ysabeeel

_Louellia_
_Louellia_
2 years ago
Commented

An idol is still a human though. There life is just more open to public. But they deserve respect as well.

"But he is an idol and really well known to so many people. In the entertainment industry, he should have expected things to become like that.'

Rebirth Odyssey: Back at High School

Rebirth Odyssey: Back at High School

Fantasy · Ysabeeel

  • Reincarnation of the Archmage original

    Reincarnation of the Archmage

    Fantasy REINCARNATION COMEDY MAGIC

    Ether on her second life, live her life as the greatest archmage alive. However after drinking one of her failed potion she died and met a goddess. The goddess reincarnated Ether in the story the goddess wrote in order to save another tragic side character. However not only the character Ether needed to look out for but everything surrounding her new third life. *** Disclaimer: The image in the cover photo doesn't belong to me. All rights reserved to its rightful owner.

    55 Chs 370 คอลเลกชัน

  • Death to the Immortal original

    Death to the Immortal

    Fantasy REINCARNATION MAGIC DARK TRAGEDY IMMORTAL POWERFULCOUPLE

    A villainess condemned by society. A demon lord condemned by the world. A reincarnator and an immortal who was tired of her life and the world. What will happen when these three people cross paths?

    3 Chs 18 คอลเลกชัน