Courting_Death61

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2021-01-06 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Indonesia
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Courting_Death61
Courting_Death61
2 years ago
Commented

Yep, I agree with Sixth Elder.

“Patriarch, Duan Ling Tian is too rash!”

War Sovereign Soaring The Heavens

War Sovereign Soaring The Heavens

Eastern · Feng Qin Yang

Courting_Death61
Courting_Death61
2 years ago
Commented

Not a wise decision. Unless he could uproot the whole Fang Family, he better lay low. Even if he could kill Fang Family's manager, would the matter solved? It'd only leave hidden danger for his mother when he leave the Li Family in the future.

In three months he will surely visit the Fang family and splatter blood on his sword to wash away the humiliation he received today….

War Sovereign Soaring The Heavens

War Sovereign Soaring The Heavens

Eastern · Feng Qin Yang

Courting_Death61
Courting_Death61
2 years ago
Commented

Nice mindset, at least he's not a simp.

He knew that love was just a dream, and he wasn’t willing to allow a woman to become a weak point that his enemies could use against him.

War Sovereign Soaring The Heavens

War Sovereign Soaring The Heavens

Eastern · Feng Qin Yang

Courting_Death61
Courting_Death61
2 years ago
Commented

Should be Frost Martial Empress.

Frost Martial Emperor aroused deep veneration and respect in Duan Ling Tian!

War Sovereign Soaring The Heavens

War Sovereign Soaring The Heavens

Eastern · Feng Qin Yang

Courting_Death61
Courting_Death61
2 years ago
Commented

This is it! Damn! Finally, I found a good MC. I hope he wouldn't change this kida mindset when he became stronger. Most MC will not put their eyes on this kinda side character, in the end, this kinda side character brings trouble for the MC. I'm sick of that kinda MC.

That’s why, in his previous life, whenever someone gazed at him in this way, he would get rid of them before they could pose a threat to him.

War Sovereign Soaring The Heavens

War Sovereign Soaring The Heavens

Eastern · Feng Qin Yang

Courting_Death61
Courting_Death61
2 years ago
Commented

Hmm, when I read the first chapter, this novel reminded me of Yuan Long. The background of the MC is almost the same. But Yuan Long's MC crossed over to another world with his whole body, it's like he crossed over through a dimensional portal. Unfortunately, atm, its novel is not translated yet. I know it cuz I watched its donghua & read its manhua lol. *Sorry if I mentioned another's work ehe.

Courting_Death61
Courting_Death61
2 years ago
Commented

What happened with your writing? Chapter 2 - 8 seemed like a machine translator's work.

Courting_Death61
Courting_Death61
2 years ago
Replied to Magecrafter

I don't think so. Cultivation is just a general term. Well, most cultivation tag is tied with eastern fantasy (Wuxia, Xianxia, Xuanhuan). Generally, absorbing an energy to achieve evolution is considered as cultivation. Surely you put this element in this novel, though I haven't reached a chapter where there's a detail about essence you mentioned in my previous comment, so I think cultivation tag is needed.

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Primordial Descent

Primordial Descent

Fantasy · Magecrafter

Courting_Death61
Courting_Death61
2 years ago
Commented

I feel complicated when I read this chapter. Idk why. This chapter may seems simple, but there are strong emotions in this chapter.

Courting_Death61
Courting_Death61
2 years ago
Replied to Magecrafter

Did u? Maybe I read too fast that I didn't saw it 😂

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Primordial Descent

Primordial Descent

Fantasy · Magecrafter