Sooo are you going to continue this one? Cause yeah like you mentioned this is pretty darn good. So i would love to see where this story goes.
id drink it. tftc btw.
dont question it too much
it had potential.bummer that it had to end like this. But good choice honestly. theres no point in wasting hours of ur time without any payment. Good luck on your future endeavours.
"Ok, I'll be waiting," replied the girl, ending the call. She reveals herself as Chloe Sunshine, and her final words echo in the room: "Dean Carleone… You can fool others, but not me."
The Author’s Paradox
Fantasy · Superfabinho
dudes missing out.
Man: "No, no deer. Deer run too fast. Hard to catch."
This Life As A 2nd Generation Villain
Urban · Spirit_Immortal
id say that this one is a bit intriguing.Good writing quality and pretty decent mc. But you know it has some flaws. But i do enjoy the choice of weapon for the mc.Some of the characters make less sense than the others.A swordsman mc is common and all that but that sword being a greatsword in a novel of this type is new to me. Most of the time its either a one handed sword or a katana(cause people think katanas are cool and overuse it). But i am intrigued on how you will advance this type of mc.I'd also suggest improving the mc a bit(im talking about the personality not the power).Cause it feels a bit empty.Overall its been a good read up until now.
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Nah i prefer this version of her. The first version sounds way too cruel.
i think it was the most mature action she could've taken. From my experience reporters are feral beasts waiting for you to let your guard down before they completely tarnish you. If she had'nt done this then in the future the reporters will become more daring and end up doing something stupid.
Was Scarlett's Speech a bit forced? I think it was but also, little necessary the way she spoke. What do you think? (๑•﹏•)
Game's Villain; The World of the Anima
Fantasy · Ellucid_Dreams
Good luck bro. Hope you do well.
Academy Transmigration : I Am The Mythical Joker Class
Fantasy · ImpendingJudgement