BoredMorsel

BoredMorsel

male LV 14

Am sleepy. Probably go to bed.

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BoredMorsel
BoredMorsel
3 months ago
Commented

I think it would be Interesting if you followed up on the backstory of how god died an an exploration of the divine realm he left behind. Exploring his tomb if you will.😝

Yo! I have run out of ideas and am feeling a bit lost when it comes to where I want to take the story, I would really appreciate it if you gave me any ideas you have so I can get inspired by them!

I became an NPC in The Great Tomb of Nazarick

I became an NPC in The Great Tomb of Nazarick

Anime & Comics · MarAuthor

BoredMorsel
BoredMorsel
4 months ago
Commented

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And this included something he always wanted to do. Rape a woman, break her, and turn her into a meat slave.

The Perverted Evil Cultivator

The Perverted Evil Cultivator

Fantasy · Ero_Saint

BoredMorsel
BoredMorsel
4 months ago
Commented

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This is Baal, a newly born Devil. Though he is born in this world, he isn't part of it, he was a jackass in the 21st century that did nothing but read novels and mangas all day, like you guys.

I became Zoro's Sword

I became Zoro's Sword

Anime & Comics · MrITookAnotherL

BoredMorsel
BoredMorsel
4 months ago
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BoredMorsel
BoredMorsel
4 months ago
Commented

Does it make her a child predator if she was plotting out a marriage to him from such a young age?

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"But have you forgotten I told you that we were meant to be together?" she finished and saw his eyes narrow as he continued.

Reborn in a daimyo's court-Naruto SI

Reborn in a daimyo's court-Naruto SI

Anime & Comics · Drkest

BoredMorsel
BoredMorsel
5 months ago
Commented

This was an amazing read! One of the few fanfics I actively tracked the release date of. I’m looking forward to any of the short side stories and makes that you’ll release for this!

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BoredMorsel
BoredMorsel
5 months ago
Posted

I really like this story. The translation quality is amazing, if the author didn’t say it was a translation I wouldn’t have noticed! review for the story content: I have to say that it’s quite interesting, when I first saw that there was going to be a simulation system I was rather disappointed, thinking this might become a cliche op mc who fixes everything, but I was proven wrong as the system aspect isn’t that prevalent throughout the story. Likewise the main character isn’t an overpowered individual who possesses no opponents, he has a reasonable strength alongside skills that others characters could come to possess. My favorite part though is how it explores and writes it’s characters and their interactions, there is also some nice character development so far, although the main characters personality hasn’t changed. (So far) Altogether, this makes for a nice reading experience!

BoredMorsel
BoredMorsel
5 months ago
Commented

Nice.👍

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BoredMorsel
BoredMorsel
7 months ago
Commented

Probably supposed to be unlockable or something similar.

Hōgyoku (unlocked), unlocking requires absorbing a lot of soul.

Uchiha With Glasses

Uchiha With Glasses

Anime & Comics · Lessa_Grace

BoredMorsel
BoredMorsel
8 months ago
Posted

Well, this story isn’t the best, it has a fairly good grammar quality and updating stability, which is rare on this site. So even if some things about it upset me I kept reading, however, near more recent chapters, outside of the blatant homophobia, it begins demonstrating excessive sexism, and “male supremacy”. I’ve read stories with sexist or homophobic characters before, and those were bearable due to the context and story development that explains why they became that way. Yet this story doesn’t truly have a compelling reason and feels more like an excuse for the main character to propagate needless cruelty. I would say this story concept was one with potential yet faltered with its execution and character development. Some parts honestly make me feel somewhat alarmed about the author’s mental health.

  • Howling Dream original

    Howling Dream

    Anime & Comics ADVENTURE COMEDY TRANSMIGRATION TRAGEDY NARUTO

    A howl, a sound of many meanings and implications. A sound that echos through my memories. A triumphant roar, a despairing wail, a wrathful bellow. A beast comprised of intertwining flames. A weapon forged from the greed of man. An anger filled with sorrow. A mind trapped where it shouldn't be. A howl. The sound that gnaws at my memories. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Okay, so I read a fanfiction a while ago that had an interesting concept, it is where the main character is a tailed beast. The one I read was unfinished so I looked around for similar things and I've seen several fanfictions with this concept yet none of them felt satisfying to me when I read them, they either felt outlandish with absurd scenarios (I like fiction with a realistic twist) or the MC possessed outrageous powers that felt a little nonsensical to me, not to mention that many of them were unfinished, which will probably happen to this fanfic as well. Anyway, I decided I would try my hand at writing one of these and see how it turns out. This writing is mostly for my personal enjoyment, but if you enjoy reading it that's great, if you catch up to the last published chapter and have any suggestions for what I should write, please share them with me. P.S. I think I should mention this, the goal/theme I wish to achieve in this story is to describe the mental and emotional journey of both the tailed beast and its jinchuriki, combat and such will be a secondary focus. I made this novel a transmigration novel in order to have a reasonable explanation for some of the more human mental traits and thought process that I will be applying to the tailed beast. Last aspect I wish to say, I am a new writer, I will try my best to input emotional and character development into this story, with the most prominent one being overcoming the mental anguishes associated with forced imprisonment, and long term isolation.

    2 Chs 6 คอลเลกชัน

  • Three Months as a Teacher. original

    Three Months as a Teacher.

    Anime & Comics ANIME NARUTO

    When being summoned to the Hokage's office Jonin Kasa Samidare thought he was going to be assigned to an emergency assignment. What he wasn't expecting was being told to become team 8's temporary Jonin instructor while their sensei recovered from an injury. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Well, this novel/short story idea is something I have been thinking about for a while. The concept is your character being summoned to take on a mission in the hokage's office. the premise is for their to be a short story that depicts the mission being taken and their thought process and experience throughout it. I would like to note that I'm a new writer and am choosing to use this as practice to gain more experience, there is no guarantee that I will finish a story so don't become to attached to them.

    1 Chs 7 คอลเลกชัน