If you understand Russian perfectly, keep it to yourself. All you've written until now is negative, this is not a place for you and others to rant and pin-point every bad part of my Story. Regards, Author.
"Sergey, grab' i peregruppirovyvaysya na menya.(Sergey,loot and regroup on me.)" you order him.
Dan Walker : Outbreak
War · StoryTellingGhost
Thanks for bombarding my feed. If you don't like the Story, don't rant here about it. If something is bothering you and need to say it, go tell someone else about it.
The two Fox Girls are looking terrified at the man,which leaped out a window and saved they'r life's.
Dan Walker : Outbreak
War · StoryTellingGhost
Full Rating! My cup of Coffee. Yep, I don't really drink Tea too often now. Captivated just from looking at the Cover. Everything is great! Writting, Action-packed and very nice Story Telling. Adding it to my Collection! Not one Chapter will remain unread! Recommend it, very awesome read!
Thank you very much for the kind words, taking your time to write this review and reading my Story.
Good to hear! Keep it up!
Grammar and Storytelling and everything else, get better as the novel progresses. Stay Tuned! Just reviewing my own Story, nothing shameless.
First-Person Narration is always welcome in my Book(Pun intended). Captivated from the get-go! Grammar is on point, what caught my eye was that the Chapters published were posted just a few hours ago. World Background is lacking for me and the Story development feels a little off at times, probably just me being a relaxed reader. I recommend it, definitively a good read!
Captivating writing and narration. Light to read and easy to digest. An interesting and rather spooky Cover. Not much to complain about, I would recommend it.
Appreciate the Review. The Grammar is fixed in the later Chapters. I wanted to leave the Mistakes I made in the beginning as a reminder of improvement. Setting a starting point of my Journey as an Author.
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original Dan Walker : Outbreak
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After a horrible accident at a local Laboratory, a hazardous virus is set free, turning everyone that contacts it into flesh eaten Monsters. On a peaceful Scavenger Run, you meet two Fox Girls which seem to be lost, you take them in and let them decide if they want to stay by your side. NATO and Russia compete for the Country that now is in ruin, each trying to gain more land by the day.A War has started between the Soldiers of the two Parties, but also the Local Folks which didn't ally with any of the two Major Powers.55 Chs 223 คอลเลกชัน
Glad to see you like it.
Dan Walker : Outbreak
War · StoryTellingGhost