Webnovel Author: z_ren - Fanfic&Novel Collection

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I approve all of it 👍

🤔 well i do enjoy our exchange of opinion ... i think it is your novel definition of dual cultivation is different from other Novel or FanFiction since some authors want to have their own ideas in that "word" (it not mean just one or specific but many words that they can make things differentiate from others ) if you get what I mean 🤯

Then being professional he should make it until the end since dual cultivation will not be completed if they didnt finish it, they can just do it without romantic feelings involve because if one is hesitant to do it, what is the meaning of doing dual cultivation together if one is all right with that and the other one is not, he should know what it means of dual cultivation though... i don't remember of him having romantic feelings to other even in previous life like seriously? he is surrounded of women before so he should have a knowledge about women's feelings right???

no, he shouldn't dual cultivate with her in the first place if he will make the girl feel like he doesn't want her at the end and feel like he is comparing her with another woman, if he tells another woman name while they are talking with each other, for example your girlfriend didn't want you to talk about other girls or pay attention to other girls when he see that a beautiful girl much prettier than your girlfriend and knowing she is by your side, she will feel like you don't really love her because if one person really love someone they won't even pay attention to another person, other than the person they really love, it feels like she is the only person you see.

For me he is quite a naive protagonist that you can find anywhere, at least those in 15-30 years old from Earth who got reincarnated in fantasy world will change their perspective, but here he is like a 5 years old, even though he already the strongest in his previous world he still naive in feelings, i don't know if he really understand women's feelings even though he save many women in his previous life and see their life experiences when he save them, he is like a stubborn person and don't want to change his perspective that is how I see it.

now she tricks him

also I hope that there is NO YURI at all ...

it is alright at least you speak up about it ... I hope you change about Rika's being in love with Shizuka and Asahi that is all ... also i like it when you tell that all of the his girls will become a yandere and i want to see how you will make it and I am excited about the rewrite of this novel😊

I like it 😊

Mwahahahaha 😈😈😈

I don't like how the MC just accept it like it is natural, when it feel like he is just a spare or being disregard if he is not up to her expectation or standard, then she will throw away or abandon him in the end and the familia treated him as an object to obtain or posses and the very little bit of gratitude he feels for the Loki family is also being disregard, the thing is that when riveria recommend him to her goddess, she even fight in his place just to make him accepted by the familia, the act she did is remarkable, that is why he needs to find someone who will truly love him than just being treated as someone who will only choose him if they don't have someone to choose😔

I am satisfied 😊