Melissa_Howard

that was hilarious love it

finally cultivation....

that was grest

great ch.... 😜 they both learned quick about the other...

yes let it get hot an jucy ... golden ticket yes ur worthy hope 4 mote ch. soon...

I understand wanting to get us involved but giving too many hints makes it too easy to understand your plot please leave a little mystery author

that's what I'm talking about author much better chapter very happy to see things progressing but all in all I really like the book matter of fact I just paid for the rest of the chapters

so the story is going pretty good but I'm missing the demon part of Odin what's going on with that can you throw in a little more of that or every now and again he is an exorbitantly more powers like he's kind of stagnant walking through like a fool when before he used to be so smart help me author help me

bla bla bla... i liked the fight just the way ut was good job author...