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TERENO26
TERENO26
1 years ago
Replied to TheOnlyKing

The dialogue is good but the thing is, the author copy paste the dialogue from The Walking Dead. It what was Negan, one of the antagonist, said before bashing open the head of a main character.

"You can breathe…You can blink…You can cry…Hell, you're all going to be doing that"

One Piece: Becoming the strongest pirate (COMPLETED)

One Piece: Becoming the strongest pirate (COMPLETED)

Anime & Comics · Captain_Erebus

TERENO26
TERENO26
1 years ago
Commented

Geez, it's cringe haha!

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"You can breathe…You can blink…You can cry…Hell, you're all going to be doing that"

One Piece: Becoming the strongest pirate (COMPLETED)

One Piece: Becoming the strongest pirate (COMPLETED)

Anime & Comics · Captain_Erebus

TERENO26
TERENO26
1 years ago
Commented

I know the reference

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"So now, I'm going to beat the holy fuck fucking fuckedy fuck out of one of you" Ashen said while gazing at Big Mom's children.

One Piece: Becoming the strongest pirate (COMPLETED)

One Piece: Becoming the strongest pirate (COMPLETED)

Anime & Comics · Captain_Erebus

TERENO26
TERENO26
1 years ago
Commented

So... how did you know?

-Good night Master- He replies but because of me sleeping, I couldn't hear it.

Pokemon: Aichi Sendou

Pokemon: Aichi Sendou

Anime & Comics · Ruos

TERENO26
TERENO26
1 years ago
Replied to Milk_Hunter

And now as a man?

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"Gross, METAGROSS!" The Pokemon roars out. Looking at the gold and white iron leg Pokemon, I start to feel a shiver go down my body.

Pokemon: Aichi Sendou

Pokemon: Aichi Sendou

Anime & Comics · Ruos

TERENO26
TERENO26
1 years ago
Replied to md_rizvi

Because I'm rewriting

TERENO26
TERENO26
1 years ago
Replied to PursueImmortality

Every chapter come with a purpose and I don't like meaningless division. I should have uploaded after finishing with the writing but, this chapter was just too long.

AN/ Sorry for uploading the same chapter again but I completed it. Go and take a look.

Pokemon : Arthur Smith

Pokemon : Arthur Smith

Video Games · TERENO26

TERENO26
TERENO26
1 years ago
Replied to JoaoV4SM

Haha, yes.

"As is now tradition, when a youngster finishes compulsory education, he goes out into the world to expand his horizons and experiment with the company of his first Pokémon before returning home and getting married or whatever. Now it's time for you to make your choice. Girls, come out!"

Pokemon : Arthur Smith

Pokemon : Arthur Smith

Video Games · TERENO26

TERENO26
TERENO26
1 years ago
Replied to PursueImmortality

Yeah sorry for the late update. Check out the little project I had been working on lately, HxH: Six Paths of Nen

TERENO26
TERENO26
1 years ago
Replied to TheSoul_Reaper

I'm rewriting this with a better narrative in mind. Of course, I am also improving the Grammar and wording. As for the changes... well the region 'Oplea' is already an instance. However the rewrite of the previously uploaded chapters will follow the same plot so... yeah the Starter is still a Buneary.

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