Just want to laugh my eyes out...
will Brenden be his first male disciple or will he be a girl in disguise or will he be a yandere? find out in the next episode of dragon ball z 😂
I like him already.
Fantasy · Draekai
Thank you so much 💕😊❤️❤️ it means a lot to me.
Teen · azunaima
This book is actually good 👌👍 Love the cover and the settings. Although this is your fifth chapter I'm curious about the characters relationship and interactions. Here's a big thumbs up 👍😁 Keep up your work and I can't wait for more chapters! Also your writing style is pretty much good, you'll need to be very detailed. Sarangayo🌺
Realistic · Wardp
Bro you're going places. I love your work and I sincerely hope that you'll continue to update your work. Here's a thumbs up 👍And another one 👍😁 Love the way storyline settings. You know I've always imagined how 2040 era would be like 🤔
Horror · Taida_Suzuki
I'm not sure why I am replying to you but...I love your nickname 😎😎😎Stormzz
Fantasy · Cynical_Stranger
That's bogus! Honestly speaking if I were the one who received this message I'd sue you! Just because other authors didn't comment back on your review of their books doesn't mean she has no right to respond to your personal attacks😠😠😠😠😠 I mean come on! I read your review five good times and it clearly looked like you are insulting her not her BOOK. I swear that in the future when you publish your book, I'll personally insult so harsh that you will have to report me to the Webb novel site😠😠😈
Urban · Toriatim
Why don't you go and write your own novel then you'll know how difficult it is to think of ideas and and cut short some important things in your life so that your fans will be happy and enthusiastic. Oh wait I got it! You are NOT an author!😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠 She wanted constructive criticism and feedback on her book and not PERSONAL INSULTS!😠😠😠😠😠
Shut up you harsh critique! I bet you that at the middle of the novel it will be interesting. By the way this book is a FANTASY novel not real life situation thank you very much!😠😠😠😠😠
Hello author 😍🌺🌺🌺🌺 Couldn't get enough of your works please write more 😊 the first chapter just sold me away and I am mind blown!🙆 Don't give up 🌺🌺🌺🌺 Love your work 😍
Fantasy · DyaAran
nice work 👌
ch 0 4 Thrashy stuff that even stinks...
Based on the storyline, I like this work. I'm really going to write with determination. As far as I see it, the main lead's life would be really funny.
thank you so much ❤️😊😘 I'm really impressed with your works.
Fantasy · azunaima
thank you so much ❤️❤️ I'm still in tears as what you said touched me . love you so much ❤️😊😘
I really appreciate your help my dear. I'm grateful for everything ❤️🙏❤️
Thank you so much dear 😘❤️❤️❤️ I'll work harder.
I know... I'm shamelessly rating myself and it's really pathetic. I love my book though😂 even though I have a lot of work to do on this story. I really appreciate your time, help and support dear readers because it means a lot to me as this is my first book I wrote.
I'll share the honest truth about this author 💯. Talented, interesting, brilliant and always good at capturing the readers hearts. I love your book and no one can change my mind 😍😍😍😍 I wish that I can meet you in person in real life 💔💔
Fantasy · Soun_Phavin
Never cried so hard before 😢😢🖤 Keep writing this book author. DON'T GIVE UP🌺🌺🌺
ch 0 1 Chapter 1
Urban · Rayne_Rue
With only two chapters and I've been hooked on this book. I love this book and the title is rather mysterious and beckons me closer and closer... and closer and closer 🖤 Love your work author. Keep writing more 😭😍😍😍😍
My poor heart...has fallen in love with this book 😍😍😍😍😭😭😍😍 Still feeling suspense. Great job Author and please write more! The story is one of a kind and the main lead's charisma is addictive. Makes me wanna see this author in real life.
Fantasy · Freylingo
เนื้อหาลามกอนาจาร เกลียดชังหรือกลั่นแกล้ง การเปิดเผยข้อมูลส่วนบุคคล ความรุนแรง สแปม อื่น
will Brenden be his first male disciple or will he be a girl in disguise or will he be a yandere? find out in the next episode of dragon ball z 😂
I like him already.
What do you mean my cute disciples are Yanderes?
Fantasy · Draekai