Webnovel Author: MrGood23 - Fanfic&Novel Collection

I welcome all suggestions regarding the story. I greatly appreciate your feedback.

I've shared the two chapters to seek your feedback on whether you'd like me to rewrite the remaining 22 chapters in a similar manner. If you would like me to proceed, I am more than happy to do so.

The narrative stays the same but I've enriched it by incorporating additional details, enhancing character interaction, providing thorough explanations, and refining the plot.