Moon_reader - Profile

i personnaly dont agree with this developpement i understand tsubasa action were wrong but how were they different then ichigo zangetsu? hiw many time did ichigo have to fight zangetsu for power? tsubasa made a mistake yes.but she did it for the mc is he going to kill haribel and the other if they make a mistake thinking about him? what really killed it for me was she loved the mc yet was brutally beaten by both her technical parent and when she looked at him who she only wanted to protect desperatly for help he just looked on nochantly without care just think how she felt being abandonned for a mistake

i want a spin off serie about goku adventure after raven taught him a more mature and intelligent goku would be interesting

since you already did naruto and are now doing bleach are you planning to do one piece next?

honestly y dont mind harem when its 2-3 girls since he can spend adequate time with them but not for 10+ girls at that point it feels like pokemon

since he was sent to a world that has divinity may i sugest danmachi since silva was pretty much at the peak getting a falna would break his limits

i would suggest atleast a chapter where lucifer goes around all of silva friend telling them what happened so they dont worry

keep up the good work the story is very good

you have earned my respect that was brilliantly executed looking forward to another great story.

hello just a quick question about your next fic will yuna have a restart like she went to bleach instead of naruto or will she chose to go to bleach since she got bored after the war? i want to know because if its the first it will feel as thought her adventure in naruto never happens and had no meaning to yuna as a whole.Personnaly i would make her travel the multiverse in search of her descendents like kaguya. (why cause yuna) still love your storie always put a smile on my face.Keep it up.