Thank you so much for the review. Also thank you for the criticism. On my doc, the paragraphs don't seem that long, due to it being on my laptop. I will definitely take that into account when editing/rewriting the story. To address some of the things you pointed out. The main reason it feels rushed is that I did rush it a bit. This is going to be the first of MANY edits and/or rewrites.
Cover: 10/10 Simple cover, but grabs the attention of the reader. Synopsis: 10/10 Well worded. Grabs attention. Gives an insight into the novel and main character. BOOK From what I have read so far it is a very interesting book. The phrasing used in the book keep it interesting but also give vivid images to the readers. I found myself pulled into the book. I am not normally one for these types of books, but I found myself holding on to each word and being drawn in deeper to the story and its world. Very well written.
I will send you an email.
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original Trials of Love *Shadowhunter's FanFic*
This is a roleplay turned into a book. This is a Shadowhunter Fanfic. When Jessie meets Isaac, her world changes. Once rejecting the life of a Shadowhunter...finding a match she never would have thought of for herself. Isaac is a stickler for following the institutes rules and hunting downworlders. Fighting is bound to happen when you put a rule breaker with a rule follower. Love is full of so many trails for Jessie and Isaac. What will their ending be?51 Chs 28 คอลเลกชัน
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Luna of Silver (First Draft)
This book is FINISHED. I am not marking it as completed because once I do I can not edit anything in the book. When Katlyn Rose turns eighteen, the tradition of finding her mate will take place. This tradition has been a way of life since the wolves were first created. A gift is given to the wolves by Nelena, their Goddess. What happens when the Alpha's daughter falls in love with the Alpha of a rival pack? You get a feud that could kill both packs. What happens when that daughter's ex-boyfriend decides he wants his female--his 'property'--back? A disaster that cuts short the lives of many. What happens when you lose the loyalty of the pack? A battle that will change the two packs forever. Shadow Pack and Black Moon Pack are enemies. The elders say they have been enemies for as long as time can remember, but in the last few years, things have been escalating for some reason.14 Chs 4 คอลเลกชัน
Thank you.
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