i would like more interactions with his family and his daily schedule... slow down the pace a bit... and in the matches score stop writing leading team named(11-9 Karasuno remove karasuno frim this).. it doesn't matter and interrupt immersion...show training growth clearly and how and why... slow down the pace... i hope you will improve... looking forward to it
how many chapters total are thinking of going in this novel... i hope it has more chapter than KnB please..🥺🥺
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Auther i am writing a novel and i wanted to use the concept of judge in it... can i use it...
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will people have long lifespan?
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should do this... haki is related to spiritual energy.. which will help in bleach... then DC
-> (this is not a very long arc. Hades is already able to solo the One Piece world. he will go there to find out about DF and learn Haki)
Hades in the Multiverse
Anime & Comics · Cedric_7512
take example match score is 11-7... the first score is always yours (11) and second is opponent(7)... so you don't have to tell everytime you update the score
Haikyuu - I Am A Different Hinata!
Anime & Comics · Nesszera