Prince_nonchalant

I like the premise of the story. The opening scene really had me with the acting. Synopsis: It's a great and straightforward synopsis that I can not complain about. It's done well and gives the reader enough detail to understand what they're getting into. Great Job! Writing Quality: For someone who doesn't speak English, this is great. I didn't see any grammatical errors and the book felt easy to read. On a platform like this, you go in expecting tons of errors so it's refreshing when a book can deliver without grammatical mistakes! Awesome job! Story Development: The groundwork is there. The characters are interesting. The slow build-up is taking place. The interactions are attention-grabbing and make the reader curious. The only thing I can say is bravo! Keep at it and the story will surely continue to grow!! Character Designs: I'm happy you included the character designs. The last 2 romance books I went through didn't detail their characters which left me quite confused. I know it's down to preference but I believe in Romances, the characters need to be detailed to give insight into who they are and what makes them physically attractive/unattractive. Great job with the descriptions!! Overall: Amazing job, author! You've received the rare 5/5 from me so congratulations and well done! Keep up the amazing work and I'm sure you'll do great. Don't give up!

The book is not too bad so far but there is definitely space for improvement. Synopsis: Not that captivating tbh. It lacks flare and doesn't really tell the reader why they should invest their time into the book. Would recommend rewriting the synopsis with a little more flavor. Writing Quality: One of the weakest points of the book. You have run-on sentences, missing punctuations, and capitalization errors. Would recommend using Grammarly to fetch these and also to re-edit the chapters. Story Development: Decent enough. The starting of the book isn't anything captivating. I believe the author might struggle a little with giving attention grabbers. Not that the book has no signs of potential but there isn't much to tell the reader to continue reading. The pacing is kinda slow early on but that's fine. Character Design: For a romance book, I think it's only natural you should describe your characters... At least a little more... Readers want to know how the characters look and what makes them attractive. Not that your characters should be flawless but it would add some color to the book. Overall: The book is R18 in the tags, yet it says General Audiences. Please fix that author. Truthfully, my original rating was 3.4 but I adjusted that to a flat 4 given that I'm unaware if this is your first novel. You might just lack experience so take the free points there. However, the book isn't necessarily bad. It's just flawed and I believe you have the writing potential to make it better. Passion is one thing but passion is wasted if not executed properly. Best of luck in the WSA and I'm sure you can secure a nomination if you are eager to learn and add more to your novel to make it as great as possible. Don't let this review get you down if it's not what you're looking for! Just take it as a learning experience and keep moving forward!!