Thanks for the review
To be honest, the world building was inspired by a much more traditional western fantasy that coexists with Wild West tales. Most especially in Volume one and that’s why it was like that.
As for the lack of Agency from Henry, I can only apologize. I was trying something and it may or may not have worked.
Again, thanks for the review :)
A reputation as ‘The Most Feared Gunslinger In the West’, and the Law hot on his heels, Henry Morgan had lived a full life. So when it all ended with a gunshot to the back of his head, he was quite ready. He embraced death… He embraced his end.
Except it wasn’t the end…
Some mysterious [Powerful Forces that be] wrenched him out of the world he knew and deposited him into the body of a version of himself in a Parallel world. A world where something as ‘impossible’ as Magic apparently exists.
These [Powerful Forces that be] went a step further by granting Henry a System and issuing him strange prompts and Quests that send him down a road of Adventure and bloodshed all so he can etch his name in history and show this world and its many ‘wonders’ just how deadly a Gunslinger can be…
After months in pain, a young man accepted to be heavily sedated and closed his eyes to the world he once called home.
He had put his affairs in order.
Said Goodbye to the only one who ever cared for him.
And now welcomed the sweet release of death.
He thought it was over.
It wasn’t.
After his death, Vincel Grey opens his eyes to a World of limitless possibilities fraught with danger.
A world littered with dimensional Gates that held opportunities for riches as well as strength.
It was a World abound with Mana.
A world of Knights, Mages, Warriors, assassins, and more.
And in this world, Vincel is one of the few to have been able to form an Arcane Core and use Arcane Magic which is believed to be the Origin of all Mana and an important key to acquiring Ultimate power.
But the temptation of acquiring Ultimate power corrupts many.
It won’t take long for Vincel to realize that people like him, who have formed an Arcane Core, have a target on their backs.
Vincel will have to battle not only monsters and beasts of varying degrees of strength and magic but also battle against humans and other races, divine or condemned, to get the chance to become the Greatest Arcane Warlock any world has ever known!
[Would you like to accept the System’s Job?]
There are three realms in the multi verse; The Cosmic, the Mortal and the Nether realm.
Hal grew up in the mortal realm with no idea whatsoever of who his parents were.
His love for relics, adventure and the occasional danger would aid him in finding a genie's lamp.
Rubbing a genie's lamp should grant three wishes, but Hal is struck by lightening instead and eventually arrives in the Cosmic realm with a large book in his mind space titled; The Primordial Cosmic Grimiore, that apparently holds all knowledge for a perpetual reign.
And so Hal's journey begins in a little city called Salmon city, in the body of a 17 year old boy also named Hal but was sold into slavery by his own father.
Hal finds out who his mother (prior to reincarnation) whose bloodline now flows unmixed in his new body is....
Join Hal as he battles mortals, Dragons, phoenixes, Gods and many more together with his harem of Beauties for the complete subjugation of the three realms.
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So this is an original novel and I am giving it my all and I hope you give it a chance.
The First twenty chapters (more or less) were not quite good but that is because they were the first I ever wrote so please read till chapter 30 at least before deciding if it is not for you.
It really gets better quickly.
P.s The cover Is not mine
Thanks for the review To be honest, the world building was inspired by a much more traditional western fantasy that coexists with Wild West tales. Most especially in Volume one and that’s why it was like that. As for the lack of Agency from Henry, I can only apologize. I was trying something and it may or may not have worked. Again, thanks for the review :)
A Gunslinger’s System in a World of Magic
Fantasy · Nate_Quinn