one of the best dc fanfics. only problems would be upload schedule and that we dont really get told how much his strength increases from becoming a serpentkin and serpentbeast kin which makes it hard to know how strong he is from guessing, not really major problems just minor ones.
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2. A story in the Harry Potter franchise.
House of the Dragon: Stars of the Realm.
TV · Evilmoon
isn't lee Jordan in the twins year?
the author has a decent idea but he drags everything out for so long it becomes boring because most if the chapters im just skimming through. Also theres too many grammar problems or just weirdly written sentences it ruins the story. im nearly on chapter 50 and so far we know almost nothing about the mc and his strength and the author just says he'll explain more in the future but after almost 50 chapters we shouldve already known a lot more of the mc but 90% of the chapters are based on the golden trio, so if you want to read a story where the mc barely does anything and the plot is extremely slow then this is for you but if you want to see a troy where the mc actually changes the plot and uses it to his advantage then this isnt for you.
will he do any other bloodmagic like rituals to make him or his dragon stronger?
will you make him swap eyes with fugaku so they both get ems? also you should make itachi focus on something else aswell not just genjutsu.
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Shortly after the Doom
Old Valyria: House Baelaeron
TV · Jasonenrick
will you ever start updating this again?
will he have any powers?
The Blackwood’s Might (My Version)
TV · Dark_Raven123