Baked_Immortal

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Baked_Immortal

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What a nut shot thought it was a new chapter oh well loving the story, loving the sims and the fact your only drip feeding small bits of power to the mc instead of going all out leaving yourself no where to go plus cant wait to see where the snippets of info that something bigger behind mc’s back is happening keep up the good work

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