please for the love of God , it's dou master not fighter😞
her name is xiao yi xian not xiao xuner
yeah it's too much, does he think he is like the winter Soldier or something, he's a newborn less than 2 months old 🤣
Raiden glanced at her, unsure of what to say. He had spent so much of his life fighting, being a weapon for someone else's agenda. The idea of family, of having people who cared about him, was still foreign to him.
Anime & Comics · God_Usopp_21
please change mc name it's confusing 😭
Triple Jade-Green Snake Flower Pupils is the special ability of qing lin
looks like the author is fond of the word practitioner 😁
"With this harvest, once I fully digest it, I can surely become a Dou Practitioner!" Annie thought.
Book&Literature · Geriatric_Vibes
it's annoying,the author is mixing up cultivation realms of dou practitioner and dou Master
When he left, he was a six-star Dou Practitioner. Now, upon his return, he was still a six-star Dou Practitioner, yet he was worlds apart from his former self.
Book&Literature · Geriatric_Vibes
i literally just got goosebumps reading this, excellent 👌
I have read upto 5 chapters , and i have noted that you use the term fighter to describe the dou realms , which confuses me greatly as it is hard to keep track of mc progress
there are many mistakes especially in the Dou Qi realms which makes keeping track of the story difficult , otherwise this story concept is good
BTTH: Starting with the complete Memories of Yao Chen
Fantasy · Lazy_Man_6113