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Prioritise your safety and well-being first Author. We are thankful for your dedication, but you need to be safe as well as healthy first and foremost.
"Yep. I want to become Primarch Rick. That would be amazing. Imagine the chaos in the name of the Imperium I could do. I have so many ideas on how to torture the torturers and make their incorporeal brains hurt."
Primarch Rick
Book&Literature · DaoistyD7lrI
"Harry, you will be given 3 Billion Credits. You goal is to get an additional 40 Million Vraxti to work directly under me to produce Bacta. You have 1 year on you. You can choose how to approach. Forcefully inducting them, luring them in with cash. I don't care." I said. He simply nodded without standing up, not that I cared. Many might call me cruel but this is how the world is. Aliens are hated on, even those with extra ears or color. But these guys outright looked like insects. Not even other species considered them equal.
Star Wars: Senator
Movies · L0rds2278
Hey Author, so the first thing that comes to mind is that you need to strengthen your understanding of commas and other punctuation marks. Second, is that you make nearly each paragraph a single sentence. Thirdly, there are also misspellings. It isn't a huge problem but it can be annoying when having to correct it when reading. I suggest that you work on your sentence structuring, punctuation marks and capitalizing the "I". That was for your sentences. For the story, it is good. Just read your chapter by yourself before posting so that you can correct your mistakes if there are any. Overall: The direction of the story is good but give a little more detail with a better description. Your sentences are good, but they can become better with just a bit of practice.
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Sure. Though I am going to do it in the morning. It's nearly 6 pm by me and it's dark.
From a great shame, it becomes a great honor. To be given a decree by the Emperor himself. She shall spare no effort to serve her new lord.
Re:Interdimensional Mercenary
Others · Daoist_KittyKat
Agreed. Author - if you are reading this - can you have her fail in her duty and then have her burnt by Phosphex?
From a great shame, it becomes a great honor. To be given a decree by the Emperor himself. She shall spare no effort to serve her new lord.
Re:Interdimensional Mercenary
Others · Daoist_KittyKat
The Phalanx is sometimes described as being almost like a hive city. If that is the case then the population can be between 10 and 100 billion people.
A/N If anyone knows how many men could fit on the Phalanx, that would be greatly appreciated. I will only mention the 10k Custodes in this chapter. Maybe someone knows.
Greek God Emperor
Anime & Comics · DaoistRUH792
Demon Slayer.
What a pity. Giyu thought. (Shinazugawa Sanemi is an important supporting character in the author's previous book, so I won't write it anymore, the same below)
Uchiha Giyu
Anime & Comics · AnimeFanfic01
Greetings Author, it has been a while since your last chapter. However, you still provide a good quality chapter. For that, I thank you.
Taking the place of the most insane primarch (Wh 40k)
Video Games · Ave_Dominus_Nox