Lucky_Dayeous

LV 5
2020-09-04 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Global
ป้าย 11

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Lucky_Dayeous
1 months ago
Posted

seems like a lot of info for the start. h

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Lucky_Dayeous
1 months ago
Posted

too much distractions. need to concentrate on flow

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Lucky_Dayeous
1 months ago
Posted

it's ok for switch off reading. hope for the best

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Lucky_Dayeous
1 months ago
Posted

need more than simple explanations sometimes to know understand

Lucky_Dayeous
Lucky_Dayeous
1 months ago
Posted

it's seems too slow pace and it doesn't look so promising.

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Lucky_Dayeous
3 months ago
Posted

it's exciting bad story but it's too slow n repetitive. it's better to move on slightly faster.

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Lucky_Dayeous
3 months ago
Commented

it's exciting but takes too long to get to point. might be better to shorten n not repeat

Lucky_Dayeous
Lucky_Dayeous
4 months ago
Posted

it seems similar to another story I have read

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