Webnovel Author: Blackstarbor - Fanfic Collection

I think he comes from a world where there is no game of throne or I never read the story. The best thing here is to assume that he is from this world but with memories of his past life.

You finally came back. I think you put a very low number for the covens. I know it's based on Twilight but it wouldn't hurt to add some things from other vampire sagas to give more excitement to the story. Such as Underworld Saga or Vampire: The Masquerade. Both have that idea of ​​hidden vampire societies that you can play with as well as adding more emotion to the story with the MC facing dangerous situations. That's missing from this story. The mc hasn't done anything in four thousand years. What's more, the MC has never been in real danger in four thousand years.

The author will only tell you that since the MC has lived so much time it only seeks peace without any conflict. You should be there in the beginning when we complained because the MC despite living thousands of the year was platically weakened. At least until the aura arrived and had to be forced ...

I have a question. Hundreds of years have passed since the volturi and they have not been mentioned again. Another separate thing would be if new vampire clans have been formed, which I imagine so. Or so I hope. It wouldn't be any fun if only a few hundred existed. I would also like to see a chapter from the point of view of one of these new, not-so-old vampire clans that see Adam as the Adam of the Bible. That would be epic. And that this visualization of him as that Adam protected his bank so that greedy vampire clans would not want to mess with his banks. Another fun thing would be if the circle saw vampires as the descendants of Cain. And that they trained warriors to protect themselves from these. You should also take some references from Vampire: The Masquerade. For the new clans, the powers they will have. And especially his fear for Adam.

Heresy. Like it's not the real Adam. What do you know, a mere recent vampire from the great ante-deluvian Adam. I still remember as if it were a few months ago that he was teaching the cavemen how to hunt, harvest and build,

I already want to see how the circle talks about Adam bringing knowledge to the indigenous tribes. It surely makes colonization easier for them.

At last. After more than 500 chapters. I think I speak for everyone when I say that we have been waiting for this moment for a long time.

The interludes are incredible. But as I said a couple of chapters ago, a time jump is needed.

I think a time jump is already necessary. Point aside, I would like to see a chapter from the point of view of Ting Lanister or Eddar Stark.

Adam the witch hunter will be a legend centuries later.

You should get a priest to join him or something. And tell the legend of him in his fight against evil creatures, it will be fun to see when they talk about how Adam from the Bible spends his time killing werewolves and vampires. And let future vampires see it with fear like Black the vampire hunter.

Personally, I consider that those interludes that you released are not interludes as such. Generally, an interlude is events unrelated to the main story, which happens in the last two interludes, which are basically a continuation of the story. My recommendation would be that for the interludes they should be short stories from external points of view not related to the Prussians. Things like the lords of pnientes, magistrates of essos, the iron bank and the common people. As I say things not related to the Prussians but rather the consequences of their actions.

Personally, I consider that those interludes that you released are not interludes as such. Generally, an interlude is events unrelated to the main story, which happens in the last two interludes, which are basically a continuation of the story. My recommendation would be that for the interludes they should be short stories from external points of view not related to the Prussians. Things like the lords of pnientes, magistrates of essos, the iron bank and the common people. As I say things not related to the Prussians but the reactions in c

If I remember correctly the mc can recover vitality from other people. What happened to that?.