"Wich" should be changed to "Which".
So the mc has powers wich are inspired by the abilities of the MC of the game: shadow or war wich is a great game.
TV · FrikandelSpeciaal
I believe the bifrost was around in this time because Bor, Odin's father, used it in the war against the dark elves before they went into hiding. But I don't mind it not being around at this time.
As of right now in the Timeline Asgard is not a city made of Uru and gold and has not created the Bifrost yet... As of right now, they don't have all the advanced technology that was seen in the Movie... Instead, they have spaceships for now instead of the Bifrost.
Movies · Crimson1997
"ruffle" should be "roughly" I think.
The next day my father decided it was time for me to learn to hunt. Being woken up with the moon a little bit after it's high mark, ruffle 3 am. My brother had healed mostly so he was also awoken. Waking up my father said "Your old enough to learn to hunt, let's get a quick meal and go." We walked out of our partitioned room and ate a quick egg sandwich which was an egg, left over elk steak and bread. As walking out my mother said "Good luck and I will have your sister tell Floki you won't be by today."
Book&Literature · BigSteve
I like the choice. People always underestimate humans for some reason.
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you put down "after they say his" when you should have said "after they saw his" basically change the "say" into a "saw".
He went to learn medical ninjutsu at the hospital at first they chased him away but after they say his talent in the medical field he was welcome to learn from them.
Anime & Comics · Scathach_
Forcing people to use the app. It is fine for mobile users but people who use pc cannot use the online version and they cannot download the app onto their pc.
ch 0 8 Not a chapter - What's happening?
Book&Literature · Simple_Russian_Boi
No harem please.
ch 13 Decision on Love Interest (FL)
Book&Literature · Snollygoster
When someone speaks, could you make it clearer as to who is speaking for example: Person1 said "hello" and Person2 said "hello" back. Or you could use a format like this: Person1: hello Person2: hello It would make reading this a lot easier. This is just a suggestion, you do not have to do it if you want.
ch 0 1 stationary
Anime & Comics · Lor_D_Twigo
Get well soon.
I say finish this because I have read it this far and it would be a shame to not finish it.
Go for Luna. Could make him take the philosopher's stone to get Luna immortal.
ch 0 8 Bloody Business and Occulumency
Book&Literature · NorthernLights_
I think that is Martian Manhunter's disguise on earth.
"Wonder Woman and General Swanwick can wait. I'll find an opportunity to invite them."
DC:Reborn as SHAZAM
Movies · Webnovel_Addicted