This is one of the best novels I've read on the platform, the pacing is good, the investment in the main character it gives me is nice, and the tension and build up of the story is amazingly good. All it needs is more chapters and a few grammar fixes here and there for me to call it a 5/5. Good job on this one Author I'm expecting more cool things out of this and from you, keep doing what you're doing 👍
Overall a good novel, I can't find any issues with it, the story's compelling, and I'm interested in what will happen next. It's still early into the novel but it seems to be on its way to success as long as the quality doesn't drop.
I'm not a big fan of Romance but I ship it anyway.
It's not bad a few mistakes here and there, but it's well written, the plot isn't bad, and the unique plot device the MC was given seems interesting though it hasn't been fully explored yet, honestly it's only issue is that it likes chapters and the chapters themselves feel slightly short but not enough to were it's a glaring issue.
Its's just an overall good read (don't care about the r18 scenes though) it isn't a complicated read and the MC's previous life is pretty much none existent in the early chapters (40~60)
I've read better machine-translated A.I made novels, and the 'author' self-rated 6-7 times literally the only reason it's so highly rated lmao.
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it finally shows!
Theirs nothing in any of the comments though (With the link) Just talking about the link, you should put it in the Author's notes so it won't disappear. Webnovel might be deleting it thinking it goes to a competitor site or other business or scam or whatever =∆=
where'd the map link go?
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original Rise of the Nimbus
After a botched coup within the Mercenary Guild left him on the run, Rylan Aylward fled to the lawless world of Lausgaiegüse, where his skills as a mercenary and now hitman kept him alive—but barely. At 22, Rylan has spent his entire life following orders: from his strict upbringing on Silopth to the Mercenary Academy and now the petty crime bosses of Lausgaiegüse. But he’s had enough of being someone else’s tool. In this sprawling Ecumenopolis, where gangs enforce brutal laws and survival is a daily struggle, Rylan realizes he must take his future into his own hands. However, in a city built on ambition, every move has its consequences. As he begins to assert himself, Rylan must navigate a volatile underworld of power-hungry factions and dangerous rivals—knowing that one wrong move could put him in the crosshairs.6 Chs 9 คอลเลกชัน
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Rise of Wallachia
(This is a fanfic of ToS [Tyranny of Steel] starting at 1488 about a reincarnation of a Swiss-German Historic Fanatic nobleman into Vlad III of Wallachia. It is an alternative history kingdom-building Novel.) Grand Duke Falken Schmidt IV of Austria ruled over the Swiss duchy, & was raised as a weapons manufacturer, expert marksman, politician, businessman, & everything he would need as the successor to the throne of the Swiss duchy in 1987 but he wasn't raised in the ways of Byzantine astronomy which arguably wouldn't have helped him foresee a comet crashing into the Space colonizing ship, he & his father designed before Falken ascended to power, on his trip to witness the start of the first colony on Venus which sadly ended with his and ten thousand other German lives, but this is only the beginning of Falken's story or should I say Vlad III The Blood drenched, conquer of Romania & emperor of the Balkans.8 Chs 70 คอลเลกชัน
It's a novel with plenty of potential and I recommend people give it a chance; however, I'll admit that it does need better pacing and more detailing of what's going on. I believe the author can make this an enthralling and entertaining piece of fiction and can't wait to see where they take it. The descriptions are really vivid and imaginative, the author knows how to describe the actions with quality in mind when they do detail their work. The author has just as much potential as this novel for growth and I'm equally excited to see them improve, advance, and eventually succeed in doing so.