Jamie_Finley

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2020-08-02 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Global
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Jamie_Finley
Jamie_Finley
2 years ago
Commented

omg!!! your book is amazing!!! update please!!!! 😂😄🎉

Jamie_Finley
Jamie_Finley
3 years ago
Commented

i love the story line and the characters, they are very realistic. I mo invested and a can't wait to find out what happens! Great job! The only thing it needs is a good proofreading, for the grammatical errors, also sometimes it's a little hard to understand who's talking and you also bounce around from first person to third person, but that's something you can fix easily! Great job! You've written a wonderful book! I an definitely a fan of yours!!!

Jamie_Finley
Jamie_Finley
3 years ago
Commented

I absolutely love your story line! And Your characters are amazing and descriptive, you really painted a clear picture of them in my mind and I really like most of their interactions. I think you need to go back, proofread your story and make some corrections, but I understand that takes time. Don't let that discourage you, it is a truly wonderful story! Great Job!!!

Jamie_Finley
Jamie_Finley
3 years ago
Commented

ow my heart! Parker has done such a huge transformation! I love him so much right now! But she still needs to get with Winston too!!! 💗💘💝

Jamie_Finley
Jamie_Finley
3 years ago
Commented

I love the fact that Curtis doesn't have the same values as other beast men!

Jamie_Finley
Jamie_Finley
3 years ago
Commented

OMG This is an amazing story!!! Great job! I love it sssooooo much!!! Please update!!! your killing me here!!!

Jamie_Finley
Jamie_Finley
Jamie_Finley
3 years ago
Commented

BQ and Winston need to get together!

Jamie_Finley
Jamie_Finley
3 years ago
Commented

Don't leave kitty out in the rain!!!

Jamie_Finley
Jamie_Finley
3 years ago
Commented

love this story! deffinately want her to hook up with Winston