The story plot seemed interesting, but I am very confused about who Liana is. The first chapter where she is introduced leave me in a great confusion, I had to read the description paragraphs thrice to understand the family tree. So, as a reader, it put me off a little bit. Also, your synopsis is good, but there is a minor mistake, you may correct it and it will be improved. Other than that, your writing style is very nice and comfortable for all the readers, and the story is escalating in a friendly manner. All the best with future updates, I hope this review helps!!
The story is a good start with humour and all. I like the narration, its fun and is capable of keeping readers (me) hooked for some reasons. The descriptions are also to the point not very lengthy or unnecessary. The plot is also engaging and over and all its a good read. Recommended to all the folks out there! ^^ All the best with your further updates Author! <3
You'll do great, don't worry. All the best with your work!!
A good read!! The story is escalating in a nice pace and the story build up is good. I have first three chapters and I like the writing style of the writer. No heavy words, and still explained the situations and actions easily. Nice work, its just the writer needs to work on her punctuation and need to be careful not to swap tense. Else the story is going fine and has a potential.
Nice humor, author! 🤣🤣
This is my reality right now. Three straight insults are thrown at me like a metal bob, one of which struck at my most sensitive spot. And I am talking about my brain.
The Otherworldly Mage
Fantasy · Diety_2004
Thanks For the Correction
He covered his mouth while the other hand rubbed his chest. Lying back ok the sofa, he controlled his urge to cough more and closed his eyes. Breathing in deeply, he kept his fist of his right hand on his forehead.
The Whitechapel Murderer
Realistic · Aislinn_Jasper
Thanks For the review! ^^
Thanks for the review Rayyyy! <3
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original The Page Where We Left
4.9 เสร็จสมบูรณ์
Nari the girl, whose punches every other guy of her age in her school had tasted. Park Ye Jun, the guy who excessively seemed interested in this tomboy who had entered his life first when she beat the pulp out of his friend. Nari hated Ye Jun but Park Ye Jun never missed a chance of showing his feelings to her. But then why suddenly he left the city and cut ties with everyone, even Nari. Why did he leave Nari alone when she wanted him finally? And what will happen when he finally comes back and Nari hates him again? Join them on the wistful, humourous, and sometimes unpredictable journey of them, The Page Where We Left... The total number of chapters (targeted): 150. Updates: Two chapters daily. The Privileged readers can get access to a sneak peek of further two to four chapters. It's a slow burn so buckle yourself up for A long journey!!!! Catch me on insta: _aislinn_jasper_ or talk to me on discord: Aislinn_Jasper #2125156 Chs 836 คอลเลกชัน
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The Whitechapel Murderer
4.78
Catch me on insta: _aislinn_jasper_ and check out the trailer of the novel. Disclaimer: This book is a bit slow, will get on track after three to four chapters. He was named as the finest one among all, but his one small mistake and everything was ruined. His reputation, his name. He was sent to jail for his crimes. He was mobbed by thousands of angry citizens Was it a right judgement? Or was he framed? No one knew. Five years after he was bailed, he was now handed a case of a serial killer. No one believed in him. No one trusted him. But was he still capable of being the finest one? Was he still a trustworthy one? No one knew. It all depended on this unsolvable case which was handed over to him... Will Flynn Hebrew be able to climb to the top from where he was pushed to fall years ago?... ~~~~~ “Tell me more...” Hebrew asked as he kept reading the file. Winchester looked at him and said. "Till now...you must have heard from the news, people are calling the murderer the second Jack the Ripper. I'm afraid how this will end. The woman was murdered the same as he did it, slit straight from the neck down the abdomen...” ~~~~~ Who will win, the murderer or Flynn Hebrew?.. ~~~~ Talk to me on discord: aislinn_jasper #2125 The cover photo doesn't belong to me, and credit for making the cover goes to THE_WORDSMITH41 Chs 43 คอลเลกชัน
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Frame Of Mind
4.75 เสร็จสมบูรณ์
‘What do you think? Am I a psychopath, Sarah?' He asked in a gravelly voice. Gradually, the man tightened his grip on Sarah's throat with his right hand while the other one was holding her right with all of his power, almost embedding it into the wall behind her. Sarah was running out of breath and her eyes went teary when he yelled... **** Sarah is a rich girl who after being trapped in her own house for almost two years finally came out. But now all she wants is a normal life. She joins a company called The Ambition to start a new fresh life but there are certain people and things that are approaching her. Which can or may reveal some of the things about her past... ------ Chapter updates: do check once on the weekend, as I can't specify how many I can surely update in a week Bonus chapters can be given in any week at any time. Stay tuned :) The book cover doesn't belong to me! Find me on discord: Aislinn_Jasper#2125 Or follow me on insta: _aislinn_jasper_90 Chs 425 คอลเลกชัน
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INFINITE REALMS
4.55
--------------------------------------------------- Back in time far away from the kingdom of Montiara, a man named Jung Woo died in his assault on the king and queen of Montiara. Before his death, he put a curse on them to meet their end as soon as he would perish. Yet, he was unaware of the royal crown prince's existence. While the dead bodies of the king and the queen were taken back to where they belong, the 6-year-old prince was left behind, hidden in the car Spared from the curse, the crown prince was raised by his foster parents in the city of Seoul, who took care of him and raised him. Now, 20 years later, Not knowing anything about his past. The crown prince is also unaware of the evil force trying to avenge the Jung Woo's death by trying to slay the crown prince down. The crown prince has to fight against the evil force that is after him. Where this long-forgotten revenge will take the prince? Will he turn into a bright future for his sinking kingdom and the infinite realms or will he end up being vanished from the memories of his loved ones? **** You can find me on discord: Aislinn_Jasper#2125 Or follow me on insta: _aislinn_jasper_ *I DO NOT own the pictures used in the book cover, the credit goes to the respected owners.*51 Chs 24 คอลเลกชัน
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The Page Where We Left
Urban · Aislinn_Jasper