School settings are definitely one of my favorite arcs. Tons of good material there.
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That's totally fair! King Magnus and King Edgar were the ones saying that they had some time because the darkness hadn't been seen in their kingdom as far as they knew. King Theos disagreed saying that they should still hurry even if there isn't an immediate need for a hero.
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It really helps that I read a lot and watch a lot of anime/other shows. I like to be able to imagine the scene in my head and then describe it.
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Thank you so much for the kind words! I definitely have a lot of ideas, and I can't wait to put them all down!
It's pretty interesting so far. I enjoy the world building along with the great detail and description in all the scenes. The intro of the little girl was interesting too and sets up a lot of intrigue.
Thanks for the feedback! I'll see where I can break up the paragraphs more.
The masterfully crafted world enthralls readers with its captivating blend of fantasy and reality. Anna's journey through virtual heroism and real-life challenges strikes a compelling balance, navigating the complexities of online connection and everyday pressures with emotional depth. A must-read for anyone seeking a VR story.
Golden halberd design
Arlo in golden armor
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original The Broken Gold Prophecy
What do you mean the stone of prophecy is broken?!" The story of what happens when the world faces a looming threat from encroaching shadows. Yet, discovering the fated hero becomes an unexpectedly difficult task. Can a kingdom blinded by its own interpretation of destiny truly find the champion it desperately needs? Caught between clinging to their own perception and the dire necessity for a savior, the kingdom embarks on a quest for a hero, guided only by the fragmentary information available. Some cling to a literal depiction of a golden-haired and golden-eyed warrior, while others seek deeper significance within the missing details. What if the prophesied hero rejects the spotlight? Will the pursuit of this hero yield the much-needed savior before the advancing darkness consumes them all?30 Chs 15 คอลเลกชัน
I just finished going through and editing all of the chapters and breaking up the paragraphs more where I can. Thanks again for the feedback!
The Broken Gold Prophecy
Fantasy · ScribblingLance