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dmacrulz
dmacrulz
11 hours ago
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As a result, the boss arranged for a whole week of half-hour daily psychological counseling during lunch, explaining to him the hazards of overtime work and its negative consequences.

Don't confiscate my identity as a human race

Don't confiscate my identity as a human race

Urban · Poor Xixi

dmacrulz
dmacrulz
16 days ago
Commented

Thank you author! Love that you are back

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dmacrulz
dmacrulz
22 days ago
Commented

New chapter!!!!! Thank you author Chan

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dmacrulz
dmacrulz
4 months ago
Commented

Condiments ?

"These are noodles I just made this morning. The conditions are simple, there aren't any side dishes."

My Monster Fuses Everything

My Monster Fuses Everything

Sci-fi · Fatso of Stone Tile Slope

dmacrulz
dmacrulz
4 months ago
Replied to TechnexGames

Just binged the story this past weekend and you definitely haven’t lost your touch! The chapter flowed well and it felt like you never left.

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dmacrulz
dmacrulz
4 months ago
Commented

Extra “ at the end

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Restarting From Genesis

Restarting From Genesis

Fantasy · TechnexGames

dmacrulz
dmacrulz
4 months ago
Commented

I’m shocked it needs so much exp to level up since the thief leveled up so much faster than ranger and fighter

'That should have put my ranger soul's experience bar a little over halfway,' He thought to himself, 'Maybe I should level it up and merge it, it'd be nice having some kind of range bonus.'

Restarting From Genesis

Restarting From Genesis

Fantasy · TechnexGames

dmacrulz
dmacrulz
4 months ago
Replied to dmacrulz

The comma after: thing, didn’t

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Restarting From Genesis

Restarting From Genesis

Fantasy · TechnexGames

dmacrulz
dmacrulz
4 months ago
Commented

…And we aren’t even sure *if what the Despoina could did to that thing didn’t make it immune… Remove unnecessary comma and change that to if in order to make the sentence more grammatically accurate I believe

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Restarting From Genesis

Restarting From Genesis

Fantasy · TechnexGames

dmacrulz
dmacrulz
4 months ago
Commented

Elf’s curse? I’m guessing elves are natures favored children so alcohol and other poisons affect them for a much shorter time span so our mc’s blood might only last half as long

"The blasted elf's curse." Merlin heard the elf mutter, it seemed he had already perfectly sobered up but didn't seem too happy about this fact.

Restarting From Genesis

Restarting From Genesis

Fantasy · TechnexGames