Thanks m8
"This mother business is tough… I was a guy for the longest time. I hardly know what it's like being a woman, let alone a mother…"
Anime & Comics · Dark_Shurikens
Yes and no. Yes, in that there may be some Yuri moments. No, in that it's not the main focus.
I think you might benefit from re-reading that text again, slowly. It legit answers the erroneous question you just asked. Hint: How fast do you think a dragon can fly? Hint2: Is it reasonable to assume that the GGs and Night Silver would focus on regrouping first? I do not give direct things all the time, as I like to create wonder and mystery. So, instead of focusing on the non-issue you brought up, perhaps you'd benefit from thinking about the significance about the situation that legit just happened in the series. There is far more there than initially meets the eye.
The mother dragon flew away, abandoning her son. She was far enough away that she was able to speak without Night Silver overhearing, or at least the mother dragon thought this distance was far enough away, it was.
Anime & Comics · Dark_Shurikens
I have, other lore planned that I feel is better than what you suggested. Lore I have already hinted at, within this chapter. I am building this series to be as cohesive as I can, once the chapter where this lore is realized, everything will make sense.
"That sounds great! A shame I won't get to see those twins. They are seriously too cute. But I understand needing to keep things private." Night Silver smiled. "Let's be friends! If you need something just give me a shout."
Anime & Comics · Dark_Shurikens
Respectfully, I disagree. They are in an unfamiliar situation, and it's more advantageous to convey the depth of how much they intend to liberate their people. It becomes more reasonable in a few chapters.
"Fine… Sir dragon. All of us here are actually human. Or… We used to be. Though it seems some here still are. Through some means unbeknown to us, we became like this… The version of ourselves we played as in a role playing game."
Anime & Comics · Dark_Shurikens
Hmm, I did want to make the early part a bit fast paced, as it is one of the methods to induce the tension of a fight. And I also wanted to get the fight over with so I could continue on with the other, imo, more important aspects to the story. It's a high intensity fight between two powerhouses, in a weakened/restricted state.
They're super cute aren't they xD
Thank you for the great review. :) I'm also a fan of the wholesome side of characters.
Howdy! Welcome back :)
Honestly, yes. I'm currently started to lose interest in the series... So if something can reinvigorate that interest, by all means.
Soaring as a Monster Bird in my Next Life!
Fantasy · Dark_Shurikens