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I'm glad you're back, but as I've commented before, the fact that he's Paul's biological son is a joke, because Paul did something bad to him, and that crushed his sister's hopes of joining the harem in the future. To be honest, this is a bit off-topic. In the original route where his sister joined the harem, Leon was supposed to have six wives, including his sister, Norn, and Aisha. But in this route, when the truth was revealed, the harem was restricted, which was definitely not a good thing, and a very interesting family relationship was crushed, because he had pure blood from the Graylat family. To be honest, I don't know what the author was thinking.

Paul is Leon's biological father. To be honest, I was disappointed because I was hoping Aisha and Norn would join the harem when they were old enough. After all, they went through hardships together. But if you say that Paul is the real father. It shows that they must really be brothers.

I wonder if Akikan takes spam comments too seriously. I've noticed this in many of Akikan's novels. Ruined a lot of things because he followed those rubbish suggestions, like Tsukasa being the protagonist. Akikan wrote the script without being too good or too good. But there were comments saying that they wanted good heroes. Tsukasa wasn't as good as they wanted, and as a result, Akikan acted on those rubbish opinions, making the hero too good and ruining the story. However, I think Akikan should stick to his own opinion. more than this

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It's really about the op of the mc. Akikan had already made improvements to the story about whether it was wrong to be a cheater, but there seemed to be drama. Akikan upgraded until the story was ruined.

World seraph of the end

Please don't forget to include zom 100 bucket list of the dead in the story.

akikan Try writing fan fiction in the Macross or Gundam universe and have a system. I think it's interesting.

Most of akikan's works come back and re-read every story but this one. It will be the first story that I'll delete it and never come back and read it again.

Is that something you have to ask? Since the ending in this story is the worst ending of his work.