this whole chapter needs a rewrite. the MC name is Hill not Fran... isn't Fran, Hill's grandfather? meaning both are men... so the pronouns are He/him/his for both. this chapter was painful to read, if there is another chapter like this in the future I'm dropping this book
how long is this tournament? it seems like it's a month or months long?
Khan had initially half-considered to hit the tournament in the afternoon, but Monica ruined those plans. The couple remained in bed all day, calming down only when the night had long since arrived.
Chaos' Heir
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
what happened to the Red demoned that tied up in the smithy?
Over 7 days had passed since Alex had evolved to Variant class.
Primordial Expanse: I have the Strongest Talent!
Fantasy · TheUngod
just go to the police, or record him saying that again. say something like " sorry, I dropped my phone, who is this?" and record it. bam
I think there is something wrong here. 400 but lower it says 8?
Physical Strength: 400.
Absolute Destiny Game
Games · Treasured Moonlight
i noticed that.. supper disappointed
except that all power of strikes comes from the legs. so it will only still feel like a heavy jab
He didn't use Bloodhound, it was just a simple physical palm strike.
My Cell Prison
Sci-fi · Yellow Shirt Fatty
shouldn't this be 20% since he traded the strange tales for an additional 10%?
"You own 10% of the shares in [Other Derry Town] and the individual is willing to leave with you. The estimated point cost is 200 points."
My Cell Prison
Sci-fi · Yellow Shirt Fatty
so does he hold 20% of the town total? 10% reward and 10% for the exchange of strange tales?
② 10% share of Derry Town (already obtained)
My Cell Prison
Sci-fi · Yellow Shirt Fatty
once again whoever is translating needs to rewrite this chapter. Hill is the MC and Fran is the grandfather. Hill was the only one is the shop the whole chapter!!!?
Surviving The Fourth Calamity
Games · Naxilia